Reviews for Invern
adara-greenleaf chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Another one for the favs...

This was simply one of the most achingly beautiful pieces I have ever read. I loved the last few sad and painful, but so magical and lovely at the same time. You continue to amaze me, Zae.
NiyuChu chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
That was amazingly powerful! Congratulations on your wonderful work. Those lines are quote-worthy! Enthralling 3

cymraes chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
lovely, measured use of words, like the use of pronouns rather than names
Quinndolynn chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
How is it that you write poetry in the form of fic? I love this. It made me tear up a little. I'd quote my favorite lines back, but it would take the entire text box, so I'll just say that this, "Tiva (because nothing so good exists in all the world)" made me happy before I even read it. Glorious job, as usual.
ericajane chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
wow! Quite beautiful. It definitely fits amazingly with this season. Great job.
time.forgets chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
That was very cute ) In character and really captures the struggle she went through and the...emotional chaos?

Anyways- beautiful piece (I have yet to see a bad one) and I can't wait for more! Jules
leah-z chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
"And her smile is the coming of spring."

Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Standing ovation! Bravo!
mia58 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I think the comparison between Ziva's healing and the seasons is just right. The imagery you use is so apt. Lovely piece.
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I like it.

And it's so hopeful at the end.
Mooncombo chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Beautifully written. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for your wonderful work!
23roses chapter 1 . 2/7/2010 nicely done Z.
brightblue chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Gorgeous, as always!