Reviews for The Liar's Heart
Guest chapter 2 . 2/15/2014
Please can you continue this? It's really good. Or, if you for any reason, can't continue, please could you post something saying why. This story is interesting, and I would like to read more.
rAoMe chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
Come on I really like this one! It seems very should really put up the next chapie...
Dead account no longer here chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
T-that bastard! Who the hell gives him the right to assume artie was cheating! So he said alfreds name, big frisking woop! I don't care if he was abused, don't do it to someone else christ! God I hope al kills him once he finds out.
Saya Hina Mae chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Aw! Poor England! (And I almost want to feel bad for Oliver, since he had a terrible childhood, but that doesn't deduct from what he did! He still raped England! He should be glad he doesn't exist, because he would get sever beatings - one from me and the rest from other people - because of it.)

Please update! I want to England to get better, and he won't if you won't update! So, please update! (I put it twice since I am begging here!)
Dierdre Mason chapter 2 . 7/1/2012
After intercourse like that, I assure you that Arthur would have been bleeding at least a little bit. With that in mind, Alfred's truck would have some blood on the seat where Arthur was sitting. If Alfred does not notice that the next morning then he is an oblivious fool.
anivet chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
awwww, so sad! Poor Artie! And that Oliver guy...i feel bad for him too, if he didn't have such or horrible childhood...but still, poor ARTHUURR! *cries in corner for second fovorite nation*
Lily of Tuckborough chapter 2 . 4/13/2012
Y u no update awesome story?
Lummierra chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
Okay, sorry if I have a bad grammar or words. English isn't my first language.

Yeah... I liked to see Arthur being raped... *smirk* And I truly big fans of anyone/England with non-con. *plak*

Well, can you update this fiction? It's being a long time.

I'm from Indonesia, and I have a bad grammar. So, sorry if I have mistakes. Last, I fave it, okay? :)
Susa J chapter 2 . 6/19/2011
I'm quite sad that this hasn't been updated for such a long time.

I just finished reading it and to be honest I'm regreting it a bit, considering that it will most likely not be updated again.

I really like this story and now I don't know what will happen.
JCJK chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
Oliver, oh if only you were real so that I could probably kill you~ That is no way to treat Artie! Dx

And Artie! Why no fight? You used to be a pirate for pete's sake!

Pleas continue! I want to see Al punch Oliver or at least this story to end!
Lol American Movies chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Maybe you've never watched a lot of British movies before, because, to be completely honest, they suck...bad. I mean, if there's one thing America excels in, it's movies. Britain stinks at them, and they're super sexualised and perverted. In fact, I only watch British movies if their rating is PG or lower, because even the PG-13 is too much most of the time.

XP The story was amazing though, and I loved how you created Oliver to be so troubled yet human. More importantly, human. It's one of the few stories I've ever read that had has a relationship between a human and a country. It's one of my favourites so far XDD
Tosa chapter 2 . 2/19/2011
I have loooved this fic since seeing it on the kink meme. I want to say I love how you've designed Oliver - the fact he's an American whose chosen England over America I'm sure contributes to just how easily England falls for him. Also, I don't know if this was deliberate, but the name 'Oliver' is perfect just because it evokes images of Oliver Cromwell and what his reign did to England. Also, you wrote Arthur's behavior during and post-rape really, really well. I hope to see more of this fic soon! :D
minavalak chapter 2 . 12/9/2010
I really love this story! please please update soon! :3 its really good!
alguien22792 chapter 2 . 11/18/2010
Oh shit...That freaking bastard! Poor Arthur!

I'm glad that Alfred didn't realise he was raped, at least for now XD

It's nice that for a change the raped person wasn't all wretched and sobbing about what happened. Hell! he even took Alfred's insensitive comments! (although he didn't know the real situation, but still!)

Oh well, I really wonder how things will go from now on...please don't leave this story hanging!

Update soon
TempestReign chapter 2 . 9/25/2010
really awesome story!
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