|Reviews for Kissing Practice|
| Yira chapter 6 . 1/18
Ooh.. Soooo cute...
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/26/2013
oh my god. does that mean they done 'it' and hino got pregnant? oh, gosh. please make a sequel!
| Neleothesze chapter 6 . 10/4/2013
I managed to find this just before closing the computer and reading it left me in a very good mood. I enjoyed the way you described their relationship, the way it grew and evolved and I especially enjoyed the way you captured some of Azuma's mannerisms and integrated them into the story.
| Gaby chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Wow... I didn't know there were actual steps to the Yunoki Effect (i know, you prolly just made that up but i'll continue writing this anyway since i want to). This is really good! I like your writing style so far, so i'll just continue with the other chappies.
| Yuuki Kuchiki chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
| silverdoutrane chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
| Kirida chapter 6 . 10/9/2012
| Stella Purple chapter 3 . 10/8/2012
Applying number of steps into a story is unusually such an unpleasant sight, but you able you made it presented in such a wonderful manner.
As usual, the intimacy between Hino and Yunoki is exciting, but it can be more exciting when the story starts to roll again. I can't wait to reach that part. The flow is nice. Plus, it's in third POV, which gives a lot of advantages to you and excites the reader more. Third POV has that kind of magic in it, for some reasons.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Stella Purple chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
That was INTENSE!
My favorite quote: "Mmm, I can see why the little boy wanted you. These lips are begging to be kissed."
The intimacy between Yunoki and Hino is amazingly written in this chapter! I really love and appreciate the fact that you put so much effort into making this chapter very presentable!
(NOTE: I was about to post this review for the last chapter, but turned out it wasn't allowed. So I tagged this along at here as well.)
Sorry, what was I thinking? One review for a great chapter such as this won't be enough.
I love this chapter! It's short, but the length is just perfect as it is. I like the part where Shimizu and Hino were kissing on the rooftop the most. Even though this fan fiction is about Hino and Yunoki, I really think that the kiss as the opening is really amazing!
Busted, that was for sure. But I was hoping Yunoki's sentence will be more...menacingly hot. Since I like him the most of the La Corda's boys. But after reading this fan fiction, I really started to think that Shimizu is super cute in a hot way, too.
It will be must hotter if this is a triangle love story between the three of them!
| Stella Purple chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Superb! This chapter is the best fanfic I've read here!
| Sak chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
awww, they don't know what they want to do, but they sooo know what they want to do :)
| Sak chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
oh Azuma you heart breaker.
My heart of course, but wow, their little secret relationship is getting deeper and more serious...and sexayyy
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/3/2012
Oh perfect! Very Yunoki like, calculating and ruthlessly outgoing... Mmm and kissing a lot...
This was good
| Sak chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
surely, lavender colored hair?
But whoa, Yunoki is one hell of a kisser! Poor Kahoko
| Sak chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
whoa yeah! Bring back the La Corda memories and fantasies!
Shimizu is cuuute