Reviews for First Time Pleasure
Anon chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Ewes. Why does everything have to be about Bella? She's a stupid dumb slut who didn't deserve anyone not even Alice. Plus your a surly writer. Maybe make I about Alice thn you'll get some more reviews and no flames like this one
Anon chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Ewes. Why does everything have to be about Bella? She's a stupid dumb slut who didn't deserve anyone not even Alice. Plus your a surly writer. Maybe make I about Alice thn you'll get some more reviews and no flames like this one
Nana Whitlock chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
dat was hot
cnnielsencn chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
You need to write one with all three of them.
milknina chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Hey!

My name is Yaell and I'm from Chile.

I really liked this femslash and I wanted to know if you'd like me to translate it into Spanish.

It's short, so I shouldn't be late

Send me a PM if you're okay with this or not

byebye *female power *
MissAlexLongbottom chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Dayum.

Nuf said.

That was so effing hot.

i loved it.
Bella Ami chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Holy Hell...will there be more? I need to excuse myself!

DAMN!
edwardschic chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
that was so hot. you should continue and add some jasper/bella/alice
Team66fan chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
You have to continue that to more than a one shot. How about another chapter, after Bella becomes a vampire and her first time with Jasper and Alice.
shortie24 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
that was hot
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Seems like they had what they needed before Jasper, but i enjoyed your story as it stands.
Jewels47 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Wow that was really great. There were a c ouple spelling mistakes, but over all really well done. I never thought Ailce and Bella would be such a good couple. Now all you need is to put Jasper into it and see if they have the same chemistry.