|Reviews for No More Dreams|
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
Whoa ... I wasn't expecting her to do that. Very interesting. I wonder if you will ever feel inclined to sequel this one? I'd like to know what happens next. Or is it just for our imagination to always ponder?
| guiltlyinnocent chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Beautiful, descriptive, slightly cynical.
| magialuna chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
So sad. I can't quite tell if she goes with him too or not? But sad to see Sarah like that. You write beautifully though. -Clare
| Cherrysinger chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
This story sounds awesome. The thing is, I don't get it. :S
| L'Archange chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Wow...this writing was great. I felt a terrible pang in my heart when he answered with a harsh question, "does it have to be?" My heart sank! Anyway, great job. Beautiful string of words everywhere. Wonderful imagery. I applaud you.
| DAsDesiredRose chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
confusing... but ok, i could accept that...
| Lillian Kayl chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
This so cool! I love it! Will Sarah fall for Jareth and asked to be taken away too? I hope so!
| Leni chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
*sighs* Okay, obviously it's too late because I don't understand the ending. Oh, the style is flawless, and the choice of words makes me jealous. There's a dream-quality to this that I certainly appreciate and admire. But the cold realitly is: I don't get it. Can't make sense of Jareth's last words. I think I'll board the 'Who did he take?' train, because I can't make my mind ()
| automated chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
That was neat..
I liked it.. and the ending kind of made me wonder.. as in..
did he take her or the kid?
| Venus Smurf chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
Loved the way you wrote this. It was innovative and intelligent, and very, very eloquent. You're incredible.
| entropy chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
I think that this is probably the best story (or beggining of a story) I've seen on here. Of course I'm an angst lover, so I loved the fact that you didn't do the "Sarah realizes her mistake and Jareth comes and proclaims undying love" cliche. I think you're one of the few who captured his personality.
| Kyra2 chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
Did she return to the labryrinth with Jareth, or did she stay where she was?
| Raindog Bride chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Wow, amazing, incredible, well done, bravo, You cast my work into the depths of shame...
Thank you for writing this. It's beautiful. Mayhaps you should consider adding more...?
| redaura chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
meh! that's dark, but good,... and sad.
| Masqurade chapter 1 . 10/31/2002
It's not the end right? please continue!
later i'm outtie _~