|Reviews for Broken Bow Book 2: Shadows of the Hunt|
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/25
I'm actually cackling at that ending. Gosh I love Armani's character development and all the scenes with Artemis! (Her beating up Aphrodite was kinda great haha) And I love the interactions with Apollo and the stories Armani told the Apollo kids. Your story is so great and your writing so clear!
| TomThomas101 chapter 10 . 1/31
This book and the prequel are really awesome and amazing, but for both books, especially the first one, the chapters were so long, that it felt like an overload of information for the brain. I'm not sure if anyone else has said anything similar or completely different, but I think that the only way you could improve this book is if you made the chapters shorter. The same content and everything just shorter and more chapter so that the info is broken up a bit. It also makes different parts easier to find if your only looking for a specific bit.
I feel like I was going to say something else but I've forgotten it so oh well. Don't get me wrong, this book is one of the best OC-centered books on this site, maybe even others (as you can probably tell from the award:))
Sorry for the long review, just wanted to get this out there. But don't forget, the aforementioned tip applies to both books and maybe the sequels. I'm about to go read them now, but just keep it in mind when writing future fanfics/books.
| Sammygirl2003 chapter 1 . 10/29/2017
Artemis Fowl reference?
| TheOnlineAnarchy chapter 5 . 7/22/2017
Why the evil Hades... It was doing so well too...
| Tychon chapter 10 . 7/22/2017
Oh, Gods... That was a beautiful ending...
I'm crying tears of mirth...
| chris chapter 9 . 4/21/2017
This story and the others that follow Armani Dive are great I have read them many times but they still leave me in a state of suspense. But this chapter of this story has to be my all time favorite, the gut wrenching heart break and desperate unmistakable longing in Artemis and Orion's interactions were so lovely. This story out of all of yours is the one that I hope gets redone as a reading with the gods of Olympus and campers and their reactions
| sirenmergirl chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
I've never heard of an owl that eats seeds before...
| ZE Bri-0n chapter 4 . 2/19/2017
The Evil Hades tropes...*sighs* And you were doing so well too...
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/15/2017
Wait... this is my second time reading this a d I've read the 4th book, was that supposed to hint towards the 4th? If so great subtle hint.
| ProfessionalReaderOfFanfiction chapter 6 . 11/17/2016
stupid reference to Artemis fowl
| teepotty chapter 10 . 7/25/2016
SWEET WHO ? MUAHAHAHAHHAHA I LOVED IT !
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/12/2016
"I'm a young Irish Criminal Mastermind and these are my fairy friends."
Artemis Fowl Reference. Perfection.
| GentleRage chapter 10 . 6/26/2016
That ending. Was. Perfect!
| Drummer chapter 3 . 5/28/2016
Don't look! I need to put on my coat!
| Dr.Awesome-Is-Epic chapter 3 . 2/2/2016
Why would hephaestus side with aphrodite? they hate eachother!