|Reviews for Broken Bow Book 2: Shadows of the Hunt|
| sslytherinm chapter 10 . 7/25
SWEET WHO ? MUAHAHAHAHHAHA I LOVED IT !
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/12
"I'm a young Irish Criminal Mastermind and these are my fairy friends."
Artemis Fowl Reference. Perfection.
| GentleRage chapter 10 . 6/26
That ending. Was. Perfect!
| Drummer chapter 3 . 5/28
Don't look! I need to put on my coat!
| Dr.Awesome-Is-Epic chapter 3 . 2/2
Why would hephaestus side with aphrodite? they hate eachother!
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/23
I love Armani. Marry him to me instead.
| ScarletNightFury chapter 10 . 1/6
OH I KNEW IT! I JUST KNEW THATS WHAT THE BRAID MENT! WHAT'LL HE DO NOW?!
| This Muse chapter 6 . 12/25/2015
"he screamed in agony when Clarisse patted him on the back in congratulations"
Maybe there's something wrong with me, but that line made me crack up.
| percabeth2death chapter 10 . 12/10/2015
That's cold fool XD
| lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 10 . 12/1/2015
| sydney33331 chapter 7 . 10/16/2015
Tbh I really shipped Nico and Armani but my dreams have been crushed ahhh it would've been funny if he thought nico was cute
| Zoanzon chapter 7 . 7/21/2015
Ok, I know Aphrodite was a total tool, but I also don't really care for Athena in this.
Plus...oops. Doubt Artemis will let THAT go unanswered if/when she learns of it.
| HgSpartan chapter 3 . 5/8/2015
Pffthahaha! Okay, continue...
| vindrueelsker chapter 10 . 8/12/2014
Greetings Xed Alpha
First of all, this second part of Broken Bow was a good, lighthearted, and amusing read. I enjoyed it, but I have to be honest, it did not resonate within me the same way the first installment did. It did not provoke any strong feelings in me, as the first part did.
But that is not to say the second part was bad. I mean, it did have things the first one lacked, such as character development, friendship, and (I assume) more characters from the source material. I also assume, seeing as you are good at character descriptions, that the "new" characters resembles their source material counterparts. And while some might argue that the gods sometimes overreact to the situations they find themselves in, I would say that you are describing faithfully to the mythology. The gods are larger than life beings, and so their emotions are also larger than life.
If I have to say something negative about Broken Bow part 2 it is the fact that some of the dialogue is missing either a quotation mark, or the space after such a mark. This, however, only happened a few times.
All-in-all, I think you did a stellar job in this part, even if I was less emmersed when compared to part 1.
Now, I'm off to read part 3.
| S'Tidey chapter 10 . 8/2/2014
Hahahaha! I was gonna go swimming but I have to read the next book!