|Reviews for When It's All Over We Still Have to Clear Up|
| Rowvle chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
This is a really nice well written story, I love the way you describe Ben's feelings andalso the relationship between him and Richard Well done :)
| AllieMcD chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
this was really good, i love how you wrote the ben and richard relationship in this, and how ben feels like a little kid again and part of him wants to just be a kid so he doesn't feel as guilty/confused, i would love to read more of this perspective with what happened next after fake locke comes out and basically knocks richard out, ben's confusion and all that
| CeilingNinja chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Really great look at Ben's thoughts!