Reviews for When It's All Over We Still Have to Clear Up
kafka-ish chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Ha love it. I adore little gems like this; not brand new situations or characters, but a simple - faithful- scene from the cannon from a more intimate, and well-written, point of view. Especially love anything from Ben's POV (he's a devious little minx, isn't he?). Brilliant.
It's a shame what they did with the show. Fully support your ban, although it'd be tremendous to see more Lost work like this. You're fantastic! -'felt strangled himself,'- seriously faneffingtastic. :)
Rowvle chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
This is a really nice well written story, I love the way you describe Ben's feelings andalso the relationship between him and Richard Well done :)
AllieMcD chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
this was really good, i love how you wrote the ben and richard relationship in this, and how ben feels like a little kid again and part of him wants to just be a kid so he doesn't feel as guilty/confused, i would love to read more of this perspective with what happened next after fake locke comes out and basically knocks richard out, ben's confusion and all that
CeilingNinja chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Really great look at Ben's thoughts!