Reviews for Monkey D Haru and the Philosophers Stone
uklem chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
The plot sound awesome but between the poor writing (missing words/letter, bad grammar, ...) and some obvious plothole (I stopped reading when everyone recognize his scar when he has disappeared without anyone seeing it), I can't read it.

Maybe when I have nothing to read I'll try again some day, but I'd recommend a rewrite if you want to get more reader.
Killua Lawliet chapter 5 . 12/3/2017
SNAPE HOW DARE YOU EVEN IF YOU ARE SECRETLY GOOD THE ONLY TRUE PRAT IN EXISTENCE IS ARTHUR PRATDRAGON!(Prat-and later Queen- of Camelot)
Killua Lawliet chapter 5 . 12/3/2017
Is it wrong every time I read Tom(as in Franky's kid) I think Riddle
Killua Lawliet chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
"...straight woman... gay man..."
my reaction ROTFLMAO
noxenrom chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
Wow. That was really bad.
Carol542 chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
love it
Monster King chapter 18 . 11/8/2017
Great story I really liked it.
cg037 chapter 18 . 6/24/2017
It's a funny story.
Shae-1011 chapter 3 . 4/24/2017
which uncle Ace I'm guessing
Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2016
STOP MAKING IT SO FUNNY MY HEARTS HERTING FROM LAUGHING SO MUCH ;-;
lightlordakira154 chapter 12 . 1/23/2015
Totally and that's what made it funny and amusing.
kamenheroHEISEI chapter 4 . 12/5/2014
You may be trying to make this a good story I get it but hearing you repeat "I am Luffy D. Monkey, king of the pirates in another dimension and captain of the Straw Hat Pirates in one literration or another over and over and over and over and OVER makes you a one trick pony weither you realize or not want to or not

I'm done good bye
Summersecho chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Coop plot... But not very well written... D:
Lots of grammar mistakes and sometimes it doesn't really mane sense, but the story itseƶf is interesting and fun
WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 7/12/2014
Too bad Harry can not talk to snakes any more.
Plumalchemyst chapter 18 . 6/18/2014
keep it up this is awesome
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