Reviews for All The Lives That Could've Been Saved
Fuffy Forever chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
THIS IS AMAZING ! This fanfic was just...i don't think i have words it was that awesome your such a good writer and i defo think you are the best fuffy fanfic writer for sure. keep it up :) xxx
averyschaefer chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Damn that's...damn. I don't even know what to say. I think you broke my brain. Lol but I love it! Poor Buffy.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
This story is good no matter when or how many times i read it. Love love love
Jendeh chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I really loved this one shot and usually I prefer longer fics. I really feel like you captured the characters and the d/s between them was great. I've always felt that if they did actually have a relationship it would be Faith who ruled the bedroom and you hit that spot on. Really excellent. Also the few bits of funny were great too. Really excellent thank you!
11093 chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
That was amazing! One of the best oneshots i've ever read! :) Loved it 3
Nathalie chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Cute...funny...sexy...steaming...heart wrenching...oh well, I guess the ansgt is fully blown in this ficlet.

My favorite line:

"Forty lives need to be saved for this now. Definitely. Hopefully one of those forty will be a psychiatrist and will give her a discount."

Lots of witty lines in this piece...but that one was priceless!

Good job...of course a sequel would be nice...but since it is almost a year later and you have not written one, I wouldn't hold my breath.

However if you need an idea of where to go with a sequel, here goes nothing:

Of course we start out with the Mayor having ascended...and it seeming like Faith is on the Mayor side...when in reality she isnt. But in all appearances she is...so she can get the Mayor to trust her implicitly to take him down when he least expects it. The scooby never did learn about the Mayor's weakness but Faith did and used it at the least expecting moment to kill the Mayor.

The only down side is that she got mortally wounded right before she did it. Buffy rushes to her side when she saw that Faith in fact did take the Mayor down...and right before Faith breathes her last breathe(or Faith thought this was gonna be her last breathe-LOL-...she tells Buffy that she loves her and has been in love with her since the start). She passes out and slips into acoma for several months. Buffy never did see the "I love you" on the note that Faith had left and hated Faith for opening her up to deep feelings of love and hate towards Faith and how she had used her that night...

Now while Faith is in acoma, Buffy visits her every day...not sure why Faith turned on the Mayor, not sure if what Faith said before she slipped into acoma if she was telling the truth about her feelings(if she was...then it sparks hope,hurt,pain,hate, and a multitude of other emotions in Buffy). Each visit, Buffy would talk to Faith to find out, "why?".One day in her frustration of not knowing she lashes out at Faith saying she wish she had never met Faith...better yet...she wishes Faith was never borned...At those words...Faith flat-lined...and the docs rushed in and barely resusitated Faith...However after 3 weeks of being in acoma...it seem like Faith may had a chance at coming out of the coma...but since the flatline the docs have the impression that whatever hope that Faith had...it doesnt seem like she has the will to live any more...and that she has deterioated to the point where everyone should say their final good bye becuase she probably has hours at the most to the scoobies came in and say their goodbye individually and left...leaving Buffy by he bedside alone in the room with Faith.

Buffy is ticked off that Faith is leaving her yet again(of course she voices all this)...then she said how could you make me fall in love with you then leave me here all by myself...this is so like you Faith...selfish till the end...Buffy leans in and kiss Faith gently on the lips and a tear fell to Faith's face when all the machines start going haywire...the docs rushed in and Buffy rushes out thinking that Faith is dying when in fact it is the opposite and she has awaken from her coma...

Now...that's enough to start the sequel...you can throw more agnst in with Faith needing physical therapy and Buffy volunteered herself since Faith has no one or any family...Buffy not knowing Faith heard her profession of love that brought her out of her coma...Buffy not knowing if Faith meant what she said the day she killed the Mayor...and the angst go on for a little bit...and...please oh please have a two person point of view in this so we can see what's going on behind each character...they can be all angsty...but I like knowing *wink*

I would volunteer to co-write(but I am pressed for time with stuff...and rather read than write)...but you do so well on your own...I wouldnt want to mess with your brilliance.

Umm...hope that is enough to do a sequel...people always request for sequels...but never give any suggestions as if they thinking writing comes out of thin air-LOL...maybe for some people it does...but for myself...I have to be inspired...even by the tiniest of idea *wink* Good luck with the a-hem...sequel...and Faith did in fact saved 125 lives...the graduating class and their family and friends *grin* So let Buffy know she did indeed saved lives...and one of the parents in fact is a psychiatrist-LOL

Maybe one of these days I will make an account...this is like my 5th review that I have made after reading over a thousand fictions (Buffy,Twilight,Heroes,Charmed,Hanah Montana,Inuyasha)in the recent last 6 months...all the other fan fiction I have read over the years...I have never commented...I know...bad...but I will try to comment more...although my comments are short stories in themselves.

Ciao...
unknown user chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Started out nicely, then quickly descended to a meaningless PWP. Shame.

The 'porn-like-sex' they had stripped them both of any characterization, leaving them utterly OOC. The note Faith left at the end was a feeble attempt to change it.
ShoujoAiShusekki chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
I have just realized that you have written all of my favorite and mentally scarring fuffy fics. You are just amazing at writing and i hope to see your continuos success in writing these amazing stories and whatnots
meetwickedfaith chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
another super dark one. you like to mess with the head area huh? great stand alone fic. very hot but actually my favourite parts were the comedic, spot on buffyisms. kept me chuckling throughout. i liked that small touch at the end with the back of the note. probably no point in asking for a sequel but i'd love to see one.
sweetmorphine187 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Whew!

What an amazing fic! It's a line that a lot of authors try, but I think you do it the best :)

Great job!
Sara chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
wow that was awesome. i kinda want this to continue cause its so good but as a oneshot it was great too. and you write buffy and faith each so well. kudos i loved it.
QuimbyCub chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
hot, just, like gah! and the note was perfect.
target-of-creepers chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
"God, if Willow goes insane and tries to destroy the world next, she’s giving up on being a friend because she’s obviously not very good at it" Hilarious line.. such foreshadowing.

"Yes, she’s overlooking the gay factor of her eating out another woman right now. Let her." Hilarious line!

"But as she steps on the note as she leaves, she’s too upset to notice the tiny words on the back of it that say ‘I love you.’" Very deep.. Wow. Awesome fic, and it didn't need to be happy; it's content more than made up for it in keeping the reader's captivation.

-jersey
whitey9h chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
great story as usual im bumed out tht is jus one chapter thou but thts how i feel with all of ur stories cus there jus tht gud XD cant wait to read the next one u post