|Reviews for Meet the Ancients|
| kaitlin2515 chapter 14 . 1/5
Why didn't they glamour one of the human guards into releasing the silver chains? That would make sense, right? It's amazing that they survived so long with such little logic! lol. I adore the story, though!
| andrea.t.susko chapter 19 . 6/25/2014
Hey I just wanted to say this is one the best stories I have had read so for and I read about 10hours a day almost it's all I do after work beside sleeping and taking care of my family and my pets... I hope u finish this wonderful story for I would love to know how it ends... You are an amazing writer :) good luck and hope to read your other stories soon
| str8jacket chapter 20 . 5/28/2012
I love this story and the series of stories you've created. Looking forward to more!
| Lady SiriusCrowBlack chapter 19 . 4/29/2012
i like the idea of there being another kind of vampires...
magan is a really great character and i like how she interacts with eric...
i would really like to see all the ancients together and erics reaction when he is confronted with all of them...
also the prospect of seeing eric jewing bubble gum is quite funny...
maybe you'll continue this story (that would be really great)
Thank you for sharing this story with us
| KimmyWSmith chapter 19 . 12/6/2011
I enjoyed the story. I wish it hadn't ended as it did, but I understand. I have all but stopped the story I am writing as well. It is very good.
| SBMntReader chapter 17 . 4/16/2011
News flash - authors on this site write more for themselves, not for the readers. If you want to write criticism, be constructive - not personal. You also might like to edit for spelling and grammar too.
And your little valkirie game has nothing to do with real Norse mythology; it's just another Japanese ripoff that shows a lack of imagination.
Try writting your own work if you don't like what is posted. Oh wait, I forgot, based on reading your profile you just read - you don't write.
Lastly, if you don't like what I write - don't read it; and don't bother going throught the other stories doing what you did on this one, it's just rude.
| Shana2004 chapter 15 . 3/28/2011
No, I didn't like this. I'm not into that porn orgy stuff. There's no love in this, just a porn story right before the I so-called loved him and was the character ain't no way I would have him be some hoe. Much less do such sleazy act.
| Shana2004 chapter 8 . 3/28/2011
Ugh, hmm based on Maga's action she's a total hoe. Sorry she looks like that on my eyes. Although this was a great chapter
| Shana2004 chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
Oh wow this is really nice, an amazing lovemaking scene. Not like some others where they rush it, and it's done out of love.
| Shana2004 chapter 6 . 2/24/2011
ooohh this is so intriguing
| Shana2004 chapter 5 . 2/24/2011
| Shana2004 chapter 4 . 2/24/2011
cOOL! hmm there's this game called Valkyrie Profile and the Valkyrie Sylmeria uses the warriors souls(she calls 'em Einherjar) until they want to be sent back to Valhalla.(well theres more to it thn that but its pretty complex to xplain _)
| SBMntReader chapter 18 . 2/21/2011
You don't have a way for me to write a PM to you so I am writing to you this way. I haven't stopped writing this story - I've just been highjacked by other muses - see my profile for other stories.
Actually, I am forcing myself to finish this story - there are probibly going to be 3, maybe 4, chapters to finish it. One of the authors, mavrosol, inspired me to keep going and the next chapter is going to be dedicated to her. If you like my stories, you should look her stories up - they are GREAT!
| mellow137 chapter 19 . 2/21/2011
Just read your story and I found it very interesting. Loved that you tackled Magan fortify her blood, it makes sense. Great story, sorry to see you've stopped writing it. I have a very hard time seeing Erik spelled with a c, so thanks for that.
| Shana2004 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Nice but is Megan/Magan 26 or what?I'm confused!