Reviews for Can this be happening?
thoseyou'veknown chapter 6 . 12/2/2012
pleaseeee write more of this!;)
Melchoritz is Sexy xxx chapter 6 . 8/6/2011
Awesome love this it's great I really wanna see what happens in the end (they can't get hanged!) they should run away together please xxxx
I'm sad well happy now chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
YES! See this is amazing I lurrrrrvvv it I know they are gonna be doomed but ya know I wanna see how it ends but hopfully it won't end soon ur brill btw

Love Always xxxx :)
matchbookjealousy chapter 6 . 7/10/2011
aww! this great so far, pianos! its so sweet! i hope moritz does okay on his exams! if not, i would hate to see his father hurt him! maybe melchior will come save him from his father if that happens? and then they can run away together like moritz was thinking? i like that plan! that'll be Plan B (Plan A being: moritz passes the exams and they live happily ever after without being beaten or hurt)! ;) no, but really, this story is so good so far! i love the dynamic you have for their relationship! hope to see more soon! :) *hugs for melitz!*
I'm sad chapter 5 . 7/4/2011
I'm posting this on all my fav fanfics: why dosnt this update it's so freaking good and I don't see why you don't update I mean really? It great you should be proud of what you created, I really sincerly hope this has inspired you to update thanksxxx :)
Intoxicarcerate chapter 5 . 9/27/2010
Gorgeous. Just - completely gorgeous.
gonnabewounded chapter 5 . 6/23/2010
I just found this story today and I love it! Moritz is so adorable, and even though he seems really confused he still seems to know what he wants, which is kind of a take on him I've never seen before. I like it.

This chapter was really sexy, and yet you still stayed pretty in-character. It's so intense, just like adolescents experiences tend to be. I want to know what happens with Melchie and Moritz, you make them so sweet together!

I know you haven't updated this story in a while, but I hope you haven't abandoned it. (Or if you have, I hope you come back.) I really want to read more!
GeneImperfect chapter 5 . 4/25/2010
He fell asleep? That poor boy is going to be in some trouble if he gets caught... I can't wait to read more.

Another great chapter, and your Moritz continues to be adorable. I appreciate that they didn't rush into penetration right away.

My only criticism is at the end of the chapter, there is a paragraph that uses the word "though" 5 or 6 times, so you should watch for repetition like that in the future. :)
GeneImperfect chapter 4 . 3/3/2010
I like this story more and more with every chapter. It just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for chapter 5.

"I don't know when I became a- a homosexual" That line was brilliant, exactly the sort of thing Moritz might be thinking. I'm really enjoying your interpretation of him, as I said before. :)
Die Yuy chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
I'm really curious what will happen the next time they meet for real.

GeneImperfect chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
The POV is a very believable interpretation of Moritz's thought processes, and Melchior's responses seem in-character as well. I'm definitely wondering how Melchior will respond- looking forward to the next update!
thegiantflyingchicken chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
You should continue on with this. This fits with Moritz's character so much. I love it, I wonder what will happen next...?
Die Yuy chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Ahhahh! Please update soon. I like the way you describe Moritz with his thoughts and feelings. Please update soon"