Reviews for One Week
FallenTeenHearts chapter 5 . 12/12/2010
I must start off with the fact that you are ridiculously funny. A lot of the lines in this story had me laughing so hard that my roommate kept asking me what was so hilarious, obviously she wouldn't understand so I just said nothing while I kept on chuckling to myself. But you're also an amazing writer, my heart ached for the two of them the entire time. And the ending was perfect, him telling the whole world that she was his girlfriend was too good.
JennaLeigh chapter 5 . 4/21/2010
Great final chapter! I loved it!

(I was hoping that Nicky would make an appearance on the finale too!)

Can't wait to read your next story! Keep up the great work! :)
AmyAm chapter 5 . 4/20/2010
I was hoping Nicky would return, but for (what I am guessin) a different reason than you. The ending of your story was good and the story as a whole was good. but I have to admit you lost me a few time during the story when you went back and forth but over all I give it two thumbs up!
Miobifan chapter 4 . 3/17/2010
I love your story. you're one of the only writers here for Kaylie Nicky stories. Please write more. You're very creative and you write well. I like how you developed Nicky and Kaylie's personalities. Specially with this last chapter, I felt very involved in the story. I wish I ha an account here so I could favorite your stories.
Jen chapter 4 . 3/17/2010
This is ur best chapter yet! I love the beginning because it's so sweet and alot of kalicky chemistry, but I also liked the ending because it was well written and bittersweet.

But they need to be together! Please update soon! I can't get enough of this story!
jimeni chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
so i dont know if i understand the days very well, but its great anyway...I love kaylie and nicky! keep on writing!
Life's Crash Test Dummy chapter 4 . 3/14/2010
That last paragraph has to be my absolute favorite! The way it tied back the rubber band analogy and the way it flowed. This chapter is amazingly long and I'm grateful because, gah, I need more!

I did spot a few tense changes throughout, but it does tend to happen. I do it myself. Just something to watch out for.

Oh, Nicky and Kaylie. Those insults were just flying! And I can see how the whole silver metal comment could hurt Nicky. Ouch.

I really can't wait to see where this goes! Keep writing!
Charis chapter 4 . 3/13/2010
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
thejacinthsong chapter 4 . 3/13/2010
Your story just keeps getting better. Please update ;)
Mfoto chapter 4 . 3/13/2010
great chapter :)
emilyjeanreads chapter 4 . 3/13/2010
Very good chapter, I love it. I hope there will be a new update soon :):)
JennaLeigh chapter 4 . 3/13/2010
Another great update! I like how this is going...and I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work! :)
Mfoto chapter 3 . 3/11/2010
liking this :)
em23 chapter 3 . 2/25/2010
Love it! Can't wait to read more!
Jen chapter 3 . 2/23/2010
Wow. That ending. I can't say anything except wow.

This story keeps getting better with each chapter. Your writing keeps getting better, too. I'm actually liking this whole jumping around the timeline thing you got going on, and I wasn't too excited about it in the beginning.

Update soon! I love your story!
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