|Reviews for Nine Months|
| Michelle chapter 32 . 2/23
Heyyyyyyyyyy, your not done yet...T_T i want to read more.
| cutechibilolita chapter 31 . 1/22
I just remembered the other funny thing. The chap of the baby shower when Huey took the Shakira CD I was like "oh so thaths why you want to go in the closet. Cuz the she wolf is waiting." Hahahaha.
| cutechibilolita chapter 32 . 1/22
Awe I wish u would update but I understand the struggle of getting back in the mood since its been five years. I don't know if you'll see this review or not but I wish we could have known the gender of the baby. So Im reviewing this chap cuz I thought it would have been pointless to review the other ones since I began reading this a couple days ago. One chap Riley says something about the baby blazing it up and I was laughing so hard I was like "it be funny if it was born on 4/20." There were also two more things that were funny as hell but I can't remember them at the moment. And this chap when they said day care would cost you an arm and leg I said "so would a transmutation circle."
Gosh this was funny story.
You should finish it belive me I know the struggle of finishing something I lost motivation for. I have a story called 36 going on 16 and I had lost the motivation to finish it but I did it cuz it would have been unfair to all the people who were supporting the story. I hope my words will motivate you to write again.
| Sook03 chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Ohmigod. I love this pairing and this plot idea. It nearly sent me into a tizzy. I'm so excited for this!
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/23/2014
I love the Celtics!
| AliLaShae chapter 32 . 9/9/2014
| LionLover23 chapter 28 . 8/20/2014
This story is so damn funny! I can't believe I haven't discovered this until now! :) I love how you make Riley talk, like a real n*gga lol. Everytime Robert or Uncle Ruckus show up, I start laughing my butt off because I imagine them talking.
God this story is greatly written and funny as HELL!
| Thugs Bunny 009 chapter 32 . 7/25/2014
Man, this has been an enjoyable ride so far. I knew that the story hadn't been updated in four years, and probably never will be updated again, but I couldn't help myself but read this story anyway. It has been fantastically heartwarming, and funny. Best of all, I can imagine the characters would eventually grow up this way if they do. You kept them all in character, and for that I tip my hat to you. I really do.
I personally liked how Jazmine's family loathed Huey, and on the other side of the scale Huey's family didn't see eye-to-eye with Jazmine. That was very realistic considering not only are Jazmine's and Huey's personalities like yin-and-yang but so is their upbringings. I thought that was a good touch. And I was practically mesmerized reading Aunt Cookie's wise words for both her family and Jazmine's family. Nice choice of words for her.
Reading Huey's and Jazmine's... uh, hiccups, lapses indecisions, has been the most entertaining and worthwhile part, because I know sweet little Jazmine and hard ass Huey ain't perfect, they're bound to make mistakes, as humans, but the beauty of being human is that they can learn from their past mistakes, such as Jazmine getting arrested, or paranoid Huey stalking his pregnant girlfriend to make sure Cameron kept his hands off of her... that's holla cool, and I dug that.
My only hope now is you will eventually come back from your four years hiatus to finish this entertaining story.
'Till then keep being awesome. XD
| Thugs Bunny 009 chapter 22 . 7/23/2014
i gotta say, I'm loving this story. Sure there's moments where Huey's not all cool, calm, and collected, but honestly, it's all coming together to build a beautiful story. For the most part the characters are really authentic and even when they're not, it's self-explained, like dopey Huey. That chapter was funny, and this chapter was heartwarmingly sweet. I'm hoping to see more Granddad, Sarah, and Tom in future chapters.
Keep up the good work
| Thugs Bunny 009 chapter 11 . 7/19/2014
Man that was mean.. Not cool, so not frickin' cool. Everything went by so fast and everyone just did a 180 at like a trip of a hat. I don't buy Huey hugging anyone other than Jazmine. I know he's only human but in the series, he isn't the kind of guy who shows compassion, rarely does. Jazmine's an exception to this since they're friends.
Either way, I don't buy Huey sleeping with some mad bitch. What the fuck? Come on. Huey's seen Granddad sleep around with enough mad bitches that he would've learnt from Granddad's mistakes, not repeat them carelessly. That was the base of his speech to Granddad in the clone of Stinkmeaner episode... though that was in season four, the first one they doing without Aaron, (fucking assholes).
Also, your Huey's shouting way too much, when in reality he's a very calm and pragmatic individual. I hope you've stopped putting emphasis on yelling/shouting by capitalizing the characters' dialogues in future chapters, it's annoyingly amateurish.
Last chapter, I didn't like nor did I buy Huey inadvertently yelling at the top of his lungs at Jazmine because of some dickhead followers, especially since you didn't do well in describing Huey's emotions, to build up to his boiling point like an erupting volcano. All this shouting is coming off as jarring.
| Guest chapter 32 . 7/16/2014
YOU BETTER FINISH OR I WILL FIND YOU I REALLY LIKE SERIOUS KNOW PEOPLE WHO OWE ME A FAVOR
| 4EyesBrownEyes chapter 32 . 6/20/2014
Get done or die! Great story though Jazzy's finally coming to terms with this stuff. It's sappy but BEAUTIFUL! Love you Kels
- The Brown Eyed Four Eyes
| 4EyesBrownEyes chapter 31 . 6/20/2014
Ah ma GAWD! Plz Jazzy hurry up with this baby and it had better be a girl!
| 4EyesBrownEyes chapter 23 . 6/20/2014
Bawwwwwwee! I love seeing ultrasounds it's feels more definet and real! But hurry up the baby needs to come!
| 4EyesBrownEyes chapter 22 . 6/20/2014
Naw, I love the story not too too sappy but sappy ... get it? I dunno, bit I do know that Huey seems to have a speech for everything.