Reviews for Marta's Lesson
Neox-chan chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
loooove it! great story! *thumbs up* its really good
LuckyOtakuChibi chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I am not familiar with this game but I can tell you are a big fan of it. Some constructive criticism I can offer is to make sure that you are using correct grammar and to have it edited. I noticed a few words that were used incorrectly. Other then that there seemed to be a decent amount of emotion and the spanking was appropriate. Good job! :)