|Reviews for Let's Play Ball!|
| mamita chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Hello, I loved your fic,mostly because I love this couple, it's a shame there are not many fics of them is well, thank you and kisses.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
why does this story have to be gay and between brothers!
| Shayne16 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
loved the story. i came just watching.!
| StormLongbottom chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I forgot to add...I don't understand why Alex is going to tell her mother something, then that never comes back up. If you revise, please think about that.
| Mochi no Yume chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
*passes out from severe hotness*
I love the use of the bat!
One thing i think might enhance your writing is to vary up the sentence structure. Maybe try balancing the short sentences with some longer ones and using terms like "the older brother" for exaple so it doesn't feel too "this happened. then this happened."
and make sure to watch the spelling
just a few points but keep upp the great work (and more jax stories)
| Backlash Button chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
this makes me wonder about brothers playing baseball now
but also,im interested in baseball now. lol
| Lambertxxx chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Hot story, can't wait to read next chapter. Incest fic is so freaking hot. Keep writing them.