|Reviews for A Break in The Weather|
| HeirofSomebodyImportant chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
xD that was a great way to get it to stop raining
| ACCT REMOVED chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Just a quick note when you wrote in the challenge description that "romance is encouraged but not required" I thought that was the perfect way to word it. I'm going to add that to my description if you don't mind.
Now, onto your story. It was very cute. I like the way you took the rain to another level so that Lily's feelings reflected the change whether coincidentally or non-coincidentally.
The first paragraph I especially love because of the imagery and the way you set the scene so that I could picture it in my head.
All in all, great job. XD And thank you for participating in my challenge :)
| Jessluvsharry chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
This was amazing! Your vocabulary is absolutely fantastic :) Very well done on this- i enjoyed it.