Reviews for Looking Deeper
forgotten shock trooper chapter 8 . 2/6/2011
i was really enjoying this fic its a shame to see that it hasnt been updated in nearly a year ( there isnt anywhere near enough norm/ norm and oc stories out there. i hope you do decide to carry on writing this great piece of writing
Electric-Aura chapter 8 . 11/29/2010
So... Is it over or are you going to update? If you are going to update... It's been a long time. And it was very good :)
Palmeres chapter 8 . 8/7/2010
Wow, great story so far. You've managed to be original while staying true to Cameron's vision of AVATAR. I really love Lydia's character, she seems to be a pretty strong woman but with human insecurities that keep her believable. I hope you haven't abandoned this story because I think it is turning out to be a great dubute fanfic for you. I hope this means many more interesting and entertaining fanfics in the future. Good luck in our future writing adventures!
Sarge51 chapter 8 . 7/11/2010
I like the story. I hope you decide to update it again.
Jack the Panda chapter 8 . 5/1/2010
I hope that James Cameron finds this story and makes a spin-off series based on it. I like how you are slowly developing your characters and bringing out hidden sides of them with each new post. Please keep writing!
KajiMori chapter 8 . 4/27/2010
I love it! I really do. Can't wait to see what happens next! ]
skxawng chapter 4 . 4/4/2010
lol, the scene with max was funny and it's nice that you're taking time to develope the characters backgrounds which is something i don't see very often in fanfics
skxawng chapter 3 . 4/4/2010
This is getting more and more interesting as i keep on reading this is definitly going on my list of favorite stories!
skxawng chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
i'm on chapter number too and it's still going great, keep up the good work!
skxawng chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
so far its great. it has a sad beginning with just norm and max left at the base. im also happy that norm is getting a second chance with a new avatar. that was one of the sad points of the movie i think
Jack Hawthorne chapter 8 . 4/1/2010
This was a very good chapter. Very sad, in a sort of mourning way, but good nontheless. But that was obviously your intention.

Nothing more to add here, other than a small note that now I'm even more curious than before on what's going on down where Lydia and Neytiri had been going every day.
Jack Hawthorne chapter 7 . 3/30/2010
Great work. Quite sad, very unexpected, and somewhat confusing. What killed Xavier? A stroke? You should maybe clear that up in the next chapter. :P
Reyana00 chapter 6 . 3/29/2010
Your story is quite good so far. Your OCs are all interesting and I look forward to seeing where you take this fic. Hope you keep up the good work.
Beatleboy62 chapter 7 . 3/29/2010
All I can say is...

Damn.
Jack Hawthorne chapter 6 . 3/28/2010
Awesome! D

And quite cute too, in a way:P

Though, it really points out how useless my own attempts at romance is. I'm just glad I haven't released any of them yet. HOWEVER, with this as the example, I will become better:P

Looking forward to the next chapter
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