Reviews for Forever
xXFallenxBeautyxX chapter 7 . 6/2/2011
Cool! I REALLY like it, maybe you can add a little DeiSaku? Even though i know its SasuSaku, just adding a tiny bit would spice up the story a little bit more x).

Love it, Update soon!)
AnimeGIRL2014 chapter 7 . 4/22/2011
nice story keep going with it

good job!
MidnightWritings chapter 7 . 4/21/2011
If you need a beta to help with this amazing story, I would love to help out in any way I can :)
shinobinaraku chapter 6 . 7/20/2010
O.o Wow! I really can't believe that I forgot everything about Forever's plot! Although it has been a long time...Hmm...

THE SECRET HATH BEEN REVEALED~ -le gasp!- I just reread the last chapter, and my eyes started watering too. It's too sad that you killed Lee, though when I imagine anyone else dying, it's just too weird, except maybe Chouji, since everyone else has a pairing and fits in. WAAAAH! TAT No more youth in this story...

MEMEMEMEME! Hehe, well here's my submission:


AGE: 14-ish I guess

VILLAGE: uhhh Can I make her a future Akatsuki member or supporter?

GENDER: female

SHINOBI RANK: if in a village, ANBU

BACKROUND: orphan whose parents were killed by foreign shinobi, found on the streets of some other village?

PERSONALITY: multiple personality disorder - can be extremely hyper and nice when dealing with people she likes; however, can go into serious killing/bloodlust mode

APPEARANCE: short, red eyes, long red hair in a braid, wears a traditional hakama/haori thing

SHINOBI THEY LIKE: anyone you choose

SHINOBI THEY DISLIKE: anyone you choose

Dunno...I've always sorta imagined her as a powerful character, but I hate it when an OC is the main character in a story, so I never wrote about her. She was originally based off of Rin from Inuyasha though, hehe. From someone else's fanfic I got the hair and eyes.

UPDATE SOON! :DDD I await not so patiently.
xXxKittyAmber x PuppyDantexXx chapter 6 . 7/6/2010
Amber:I couldn't log in..SORRY! and I hope I'm not late with the character entry...


Name: Amber Mitsuki

Age: same as Deidara

Village/Loyalty: Akatsuki

Gender: female

Shinobi Rank: like Sakura

Background: She was the most respected shinobi in the Sand Village. She was only 6 years old when she was labeled the 2nd most strongest shinobi. She and Gaara were the best of friends(she was older),even though many tried convincing her it was like being friends with the devil. She didnt care. Something tragic happened though,her parents were murdered by rogue ninja. She became cold,heartless and uncaring at the age of 9. They sent her on more missions(11years old),never giving the poor girl a 13,she became tired of it and rebelled. She had killed nearly 50 of the strongest shinobi in less than 1hour. It hurt when Gaara had filed an execution on her. She left. Her final words: Goodbye,Gaara. She came across the Akatsuki(16 years old),injured and coughing blood. She was weak and almost fell until Deidara caught her in his arms. He showed her kindness and tended to her injuries. She had cried for the first time in years in his arms. Since then,she had sworn her loyalty to Akatsuki while developing feelings towards Deidara. She shows only her 'family' emotions. She somehow obtained Mangekyo Sharingan even though she isnt Uchiha. She and Deidara have had their 1st kiss and hold hands/kiss from time to time.(secretly bf and gf..PLEASE~!)

Personality: cold,uncaring,heartless to everyone not Akatsuki. Caring,loving,and fun only to Akatsuki(mostly Deidara).

Appearance: long black hair(sideponytail) purple eyes w/white ring around the pupil, 5,7"

Shinobi they like: Akatsuki, Sakura,Sasuke,Gaara

Shinobi they dislike: Karin,Orochimaru

Etc: met sasuke a few times. she and Sasuke are secretly friends. Hugs when they meet again. Deidara gets jealous and whines like a child causing Amber to laugh.


please use my character! It'll mean alot to me! thankyou!

CrazyGreyWolfGirl chapter 6 . 7/5/2010
MY OC IS BACK! haha. im such a horrible reader. XP

id blame the over amoount of updates but its my fault for not reading them. im sorry for that. i really am. i had to seriously miss out on ur amazing story and its all my fault. im so sorry!

im so in love with this story its not even funny. i really am kind of glad that you rewrote it because it did get a little all over the place. this one is a bit less all over the place but it still holds this amount of "wats going to happen next". i really do love this story and i hope you can update soon ...hopefully after i catch up on my update pileup. -.-''


MewMewApple101 chapter 6 . 7/5/2010
Hi, I love your story, poor Lee and Matio Gai, a teacher should never have to see their student die but that's the ninja way...anyways WRITE ON


Name: Ayako Andou

Age: *Sakura’s age*

Village/Loyalty: Sand village or Akatsuki

Gender: Female

Shinobi Rank: Anbu or missing ninja

Background: For sand ninja- parents were missing-ninja, she grew up with them till she was 5 when they were killed, she was then taken to the sand village and was introduced to Gaara and has been attached since.

Akatsuki- Was born in the sound village and became a ninja because she wanted to protect herself, found out how much of a creeper Orochimaru was and left, went to the Akatsuki because she wanted to learn from them

Personality: She is the sweet cute hyper person but when she’s fighting she is deadly and so rude and provoking. She always smiles to taunt her enemy ad is good at it. When she is not fighting she is also very clumsy and seems like a horrible ninja but when she is fighting she is one of the best but also ends up with some big injuries

Appearance: Long black hair (an inch past her butt) and bright blue eyes

Shinobi they like: Gaara, Temari, Kankuto, Sakura, Deidara, Itachi, Pein, Zetsu, Tobi, Hidan, Kakuzu, Tenten (heard about her)

Shinobi they dislike: Kisame, Sasuke, Konan, Karin, Orochimaru, Neji
MidnightWritings chapter 6 . 7/4/2010
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! :D The mystery has been SOLV-ED! :D Hooray~ Well, here's to another great chapter! Again, thank you soooooo much for the plug :D
MidnightWritings chapter 5 . 7/4/2010
*spazz* I'm so happy you liked it! :D The shoutout literally made me squeal and fall out of my chair. :3 It made me happy! :D I noticed some reviewers are adding in their OC's and the old ones are coming back too, right? :D That chapter was really good. I bawled my eyes out for half an hour when I read that ending. POOR LEE! D: I'm still crying a little now... " Great chapter! Now off to read the next!
Lerysakon chapter 6 . 7/2/2010
This story is really getting interesting! I really like reading stories where Sakura leaves the village or something D. It is well-written and the plot is building up. Keep up the good work! Oh, and if you don't mind, I'd like to submit an OC but I'll send it through PM.
SasuSakuisforalways chapter 6 . 7/2/2010




Shinobi Rank:ANBU Black Ops

Background:Doesn't know who parrents are. Grew up at best friends house. Wants to marry a guy she'll never get her hands on.

Personality:Clever, self centered, loving, emotional, caring, paranoid, but friendly.

Appearance:Wild hazelnut color hair: short. Electric green eyes.

Shinobi they like: only the one she wants to marry

Shinobi they dislike:everyone else
Cheetay chapter 6 . 7/2/2010
Awesome chapter! :D:D

Name: Koneko Tora

Age: ... (how old are the people in this?) Um... same age as Sakura, I guess

Village/Loyalty: Konohagakure

Gender: Female

Shinobi Rank: Chunin

Background: Grew up in the Takumi Village, but soon moved to Konoha to train as a Ninja

Personality: Calm, smart, but can be annoying. Likes to know things and is kinda noisy, yet can be shy

Appearance: Dark brown eyes with light brown hair that stops just after her underarm

Shinobi they like: Not many; kinda Tenten and Shino.

Shinobi they dislike: None, gets along with almost anyone... except sickos/creepers and evil dudes

tanithlipsky chapter 5 . 6/27/2010
Black-Death-646 chapter 5 . 6/26/2010
That was such a sad ending! *Cries* Keep up the good work and always keep writing!
Black-Death-646 chapter 4 . 5/14/2010
I'm glad this story has been updated! I look forward to the next chapter! *hint hint* :P Keep up the good work and always keep writing!
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