|Reviews for Just Breathe|
| Amalia216 chapter 2 . 11/30/2012
I just wanted to comment here before I read ch. 3 Because I brain is already half melted , and if I don't comment now and tell you how HOT and good this is now I won't be able to. Love this so much. Hotch/Rossi are my CM OTP outside of Morgan/Reid. Love this so much.
| BlackBeautyQueen33 chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
| wildwordwomyn chapter 4 . 9/10/2011
Ooh, this story was great. I loved how passionate your Hotch was. I always thought that about him, that if he'd only let go he'd be...invincible. Not literally but...Okay, I'm not making sense but hopefully you understand what I mean. Anyway, I loved it!
| jj chapter 4 . 6/9/2011
| greeneyed-angiebaby chapter 4 . 4/25/2011
DAMN-O-RAMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAA! that was freakin' hottttttttt! I wanna see me some more sizzling shower sex! that was better than fucking! (pardon my french lol)
| Susie869 chapter 4 . 3/11/2011
absoulutely love the whole story, very hot and sexy and mushy goodness keep up the awesome work...
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
Hottttttt. Whoo! And very natural. Some writers make Hotch talk too much, but I think you nailed it just right. :)
| Ajordan2426 chapter 4 . 9/22/2010
I really don't read slash stories but this was really good, awkward to picture but really good, you should check out my two stories on my profile please! Thanks
| angry penguin chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
| brownies fans and other stuff chapter 4 . 3/11/2010
. . . wow. that was really well done. i love hotch/rossi fic's, but there arn't that many of them out there. this one is really well written! especially for a first slash fic! great job!
| hotchdavreid chapter 4 . 2/21/2010
What a wonderful, perfect epilogue! Very HOT and very well-written. And leaving off on an emotional cliffhanger since Rossi almost tells Hotch what he so needs to tell him. Oh I want more!
| WhispersInTheShawdows chapter 4 . 2/18/2010
This is great!
| starofoberon chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
Nicely done - characters faithful to their characterization, your language powerful. and sometimes elegant. Welcome to the pastures outside your comfort zone. It's generally an instructive place to visit. :)
| hotchdavreid chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
Hi thn, It's hotchdavreid. I loved your story. I'm so glad you posted it, and I sure do hope you'll write more about Hotch/Rossi. I thought you did the dialog exceptionally well, and the more detailed sexy parts, too. My favorite part was what Rossi told Hotch at the very end. 3
| dannyanne chapter 3 . 2/12/2010
Wow! I love it! I enjoyed reading it very much.