Reviews for Students of the Snake
Jeon Ar.c chapter 21 . 7/26
awoop, If they fake the deaths aren't they supposed to hide their identity Σ(゚Д゚;)
gleon1922 chapter 33 . 7/3
se que es tarde, pero porque no mejor poner a Karin, con Kabuto?
y se que no quieres hacer el Harem demasiado grande, pero porque detenerse en 9 y no ser 12, con la lista siendo así:
8-Temari (enlace con Suna)
9-Kurotsuchi (enlace con Iwa)
10-Ayame o Shizune
11-Samui (enlace con Kumo)
12-Shizuka (enlace con Nadeshiko y porque me agradaría mucho que este con Naruto)
gleon1922 chapter 11 . 7/3
sacando lo que Kabuto hizo en el Canon y como es Yamato, no estaria mal darles mas de 1 pareja, ya conociendo como es Anko (en el caso de que Anko este con cualquiera de ellos XD) y poner a Temari con Kabuto
gleon1922 chapter 10 . 7/3
pueden ser, aunque ya se que es tarde, a Samui, Shizuka y Mabui? y sacar a Hanabi, para que este con Gaara, darle un mini-harem a Gaara, con Fuu, Hanabi, Yugito, Matzuri y Yukata, ya que Naruto va a estar OP.
Desde ya muchas Gracias y te esta quedando muy bien hasta donde estoy leyendo, muy Original y me gusta
Zsombi chapter 10 . 5/31
So a chapter back there were 2 hyuuga guards accompanying the mother.. what happened to them? Are they gone or did they agree to settle?
Guest chapter 78 . 5/12
grimme chapter 5 . 4/30
chapter 5 is one for the dogs...
a researcher thats barely at chunin level somehow gets past orochimarus guard to attack anko and then oro is distracted so he proceeds to tag all the others next to orochimaru...
only after thats done and every child gets their own perfect mark without much or even any struggling does oro have the bright idea to kill the bastard...
well that also seems to include ALL 4 of his snakes...

a bit much force here, dont you think...
i dont think that this line of plot is necessarily bad but if you dont work for it you dont deserve it and that chapter looks like it was about as much work as taking a dump

my will be done may be a great tombkings skill but its certainly a bad skill for a writer to have.
Guest chapter 33 . 4/27
Ino because why not and more lemons whats the worst that could happen with out them but I know u already wrote the next chapter and gammer and story were fairly good so
Giovanni Vadhir Rios chapter 4 . 3/27
Good Chapter
Giovanni Vadhir Rios chapter 3 . 3/27
Giovanni Vadhir Rios chapter 2 . 3/27
Giovanni Vadhir Rios chapter 1 . 3/27
Good Work.
Guest chapter 82 . 3/3
This was a an amazing story never thought i would see a pro-sound village/ orochimaru story
Fenrir69 chapter 11 . 1/8
I can't wait to see the Kekkei Genkai you thought of
Keep Up the Amazing work
MattBlack chapter 77 . 1/4
Fuinjutsu, not juinjutsu.
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