|Reviews for Expecting|
| Alicia Olivia Mirza chapter 1 . 8/13
Nice style and story! :)
I especially liked when Sirius said that the baby was going to be the hope of new future... Oh, god, I was laughing so hard at that ;)
I love Sirius/Lily friendship and I'm a big fan of Jily, so my story :3
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
| Ananniemous chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
zat tis good. I like it. thank you very much for writing it. :) I'm sorry, I haven't had enough milk today. usually I'm very hyper when I read. sorry! I like it!
| lasting illusion chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Another awesome story!
This was so great and I especially loved the line at the end about Sirius being right about Harry being a symbol of hope...sigh PERFECT!
Everything about this story was amazing, my only complaint? That it is a oneshot!
I already reviewed your other story 'No Regrets' and I realised that it doesn't matter whose point of view you're writing from it is so realistic and cannon and exactly how I picture the characters to be like.
Now I have a question to ask:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a story about James and Lily. Like a multichapter story either about their 7th year or before then or after then or just anything with the Marauders/Lily.
Because I know that any story that you come up with that has them in it will be sheer PERFECTION! Those kinds of stories are my absolute favorite and I would love to read a new one!
Please please consider it!
Thanks for being such a fantastic writer, and now I am so much happier after reading this story (in my review for 'no regrets' I mentioned that it depressed me, only because of Peter's betrayel of course- the writing was amazing. Anyways this story has completely lifted my spirits!)
Thank you! :D
| ElvendorkLuVer chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I love the letter from Sirius!
| redundantaccount chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
I love this, because you have made the characters exactly how I love them. Too many people make James and Sirius stupid idiots, Remus a swot and Lily a Marauder era Hermione but you have done amazingly, and didn't make me want to stop reading. 3
| SamsSmiles247 chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
haha love it sirius i sso cute, nice writing:)
| An Aspiring Author chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
very cute story! love the sirius and lily friendship and protective james is so cute! great job!
| iim asia chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I liked this. It was cute and a style that I don't usually read, but you pulled it off brilliantly. Update soon, please.
| svgurl410 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Wow, this was great! I love the way you write Sirius. The whole idea of Sirius writing a letter to Remus and telling the story was just perfect. :D
Wonderful job! :)
| deleted9 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I like the way you have arranged this...the bits of story in between letters, it's a neat way to set it up! They seem so cute together, I love it. I love Sirius too...he was my second to least favorite death of the series. I cried so much the first time I read that. He's not that observant hahah, I mean, I guess I know she's pregnant so I can pick out the signs of it but still it's a little obvious. I really hope that when I'm pregnant in the future, that sort of sickness doesn't hit me that hard. I can't believe it took him that long to figure out either haha. "This baby,” his hand moved to her stomach, “will give the world hope.”" Great line! Loved this, great job!
| aesylthryth chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
yey! first review!
so, where to start, where to start...
let's see, first
IT WAS ADORABLE!
IT WAS CUTE!
although here's a typo i spotted!
"Harry Potter did, indeed, become the most poweful symbol of hope"
it lacked R
anyways, GREAT STORY! again...