|Reviews for The Wolf and His Girl|
| Guest chapter 67 . 2/24
Awesome storie. But I really hate this chapter. It sucks. Everyone came down on Jared lie he was wrong to be angry. But personally I think Bella was wrong. She saw that they were vampires and she didn't make a phone call or anything to let anyone know.
Jared just spent a good portion of their relationship worried that a certain red head camp would kill is imprint wife and child. He just finished a battle with a group of newborn vamps set to do thy exact thing and dealing with his wife obsessive vamp ex and family. He has every right to be pissed that she would put herself in that situation without letting anyone know what was going on. Because like it or not when it comes to the supernatural she CAN'T take care of herself. And did she even think about the fact that if they were lying and had decided to follow her getting to her some where off the side of the road not only could they have killed her but her kid and Jared. I get she has no presevation for herded but what about her family.
Sorry this chap haut kind of pissed me off because I think he was justified in how he reacted.
| jacksperluvr chapter 80 . 12/26/2013
just re-read this story and i still love it.
| xxXTheBelieverXxx chapter 81 . 12/18/2013
Did paul ever comeback?
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 62 . 11/30/2013
WILL SOMEBODY PLEASE TELL ME WHAT THE PROBLEM IS WITH ORANGES?
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 58 . 11/30/2013
Please don't kill Bree and Diego!
Watching Bree die in the movie tortured me enough without having to read about it in this fic as well!
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 45 . 11/30/2013
How about Katherine Rose or for a girl and Andrew Jacob for a boy?
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
Joshua Uley should be Embry's father.
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
(shakes head in amazement)
Okay, those particular dreams are freaky!
It's like something deep inside Bella knows exactly what's going on, even if Bella herself hasn't made the connection yet, and is trying to warn her...
| Mei fa-chan chapter 80 . 11/9/2013
| Megan chapter 82 . 11/8/2013
Why won't you update in here? I tried selecting Bella and Jared as characters for a story like you can on here but it would let me I sometime would have stories if Bella and Edward or someone else in the summary but not bout Bella and Jared together
| Arrowhead1996 chapter 80 . 9/26/2013
This story was so beautiful! I absolutely adored it! You also get bonus points for minimal cussing.
| dafdill chapter 61 . 9/18/2013
This chapter was really good. Your fight was even better than the original, you gave us a bit more action than she did. And I like the fact the Bella didn't try to help, especially since she is pregnant.
| IxoxoheartoxoxNuka chapter 83 . 9/17/2013
This was a wonderful story to read. Loved it.
| dafdill chapter 31 . 9/16/2013
Since when are Pop Tarts frozen?
| Emily Taylor chapter 72 . 9/12/2013
Hi. I really like this story, but I was reading it on twilighted and i was just wondering why you stopped posting chapters there?