chapter 28 is absolutely delightful! probably my new favourite thing!

Chapter 12 started out amusing and became increasingly hilarious xD

Chapter 11:
That has to be one of the best, if not the best, fic describing some of Roys struggles with the military and the political game. Most fics don't accent on that and portray only how high and mighty Roy is. But he is still below so many people in the chain of command and so many envy, fear or hate him. Ed probably has less enemies or at least less dangerous ones.

Also loved the role of the blond tornado xD You know how they illustrate his team as chess pieces in the manga and the path to the fuhrership or any goal as a chess game? There is no way Roy won't win the Game, because he is not playing with a normal set of game pieces. He has Edward Elric

I enjoy each individual chapter so much that I decided to comment on my favorite ones, instead of leaving a review at the end.
So my last comment was on chapter 9 and I forgot to tell you how hilarious I found Edlike a wild cat that only Al can deal withAnd now on chapter 10 with Winry and the brothers competition for the girl. It was so well written, once again. Bitter-sweet, the perfect ending, effortless switching between scenes. Awesome.

So funny and so well written :D

I loved Papa Mustang here!

Aaawwwwww that final chapter, especially that ending, is absolutely adorable!
This entire story has been so well written!
The emotional chapters are heartbreaking and the funny ones are hilarious and make me grin
This was an amazing story and I absolutely loved reading it!

I'm halfway through this fanfic of events and wow, these are absolutely amazing! They're just the right mixture of emotionally devastating and hilarious and I just love this! This chapter in particular was just wonderful - and the last line by Mustang about Al was so powerful
Normally I dont review in the middle of reading but I just had to!

Please update

This story was beautiful and hilarious! I loved it so much, thank you for writhing this world or art!

This is gonna be real useful when he has kids.

That was adorable and wonderful and I have a soft spot for Fuery that just got softer and awwwwww. That was so sweet. I find myself hoping that Adam has a successful tech company that the future Fuhrer funds.

Oh, I was JUST craving quality familial Al/Roy content! This is exactly what I was hoping for! I feel like Al is so often left out of relationships, which is sad because, as you pointed out, he needs it! I like how you did it here, where he was almost resorting to Ho. Like he didn’t think he could have Mustang’s fatherly presence, so he went for the second best. But,,, Mustang’s just out here adopting everyone. Love that. ToT

UGH THAT HURT

You’ve done it. This is It. This is the best. It’s wonderful and so, so amazing.