Reviews for BREAKING DAWN, the other side of the story
MandieDS chapter 5 . 10/21
This story is amazing, you are a talented writer... But its very hard to read. Your English is very difficult to follow. Have you considered hav native enough speaker go over your work?
Cullen1295 chapter 4 . 8/17/2016
Thats fine it was outside in the movie but you are very amazing at writing the story is amazing I've never thought about it in Edwards point of View.
Carla Gasperoni chapter 40 . 10/4/2015
Absolutely great!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/27/2014
I know right he is such a buzz kill
Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2014
Its all right I was envisioning the movie wedding and it took place out side also its up to interpretation u did a really good job
Sunshine Hufford chapter 22 . 8/27/2014
Its awesome. I just wish u could of kept bella human a little while longer. It s gooid anyway
Sunshine Hufford chapter 22 . 8/24/2014
WOW! You are very good. I cant stop reading this book. It is very good. Please keep on going! PLEASE!
sunshine hufford chapter 21 . 8/24/2014
! Wow
Guest chapter 17 . 6/15/2013
i love it!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/15/2013
it's amazing! you are really good!
TwilightWriter1234 chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
This is one of the BEST stories I have read. I mean, seriously. I think its really cool you take the time to translate it all too! Keep writing! I loved all the little moments that weren't in the book. You did a great job. It was interesting. I know I love getting reviews, so i'll bet you do too! Maybe you could check out my stories. I only have a few...but I am working on that when I get the chance from my busy schedule! Good job, once again!
unemunem chapter 2 . 3/27/2013
I tried, but the grammatical errors make this too difficult to read. *sigh*
Guest chapter 35 . 3/3/2013
that was amazing, i loved it i wish more of the twilight books had Edwards side of the story maybe you should do it one day PLEASS ohh and i loved it very much... :D
Caseycat517 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
I LOVE IT! You so deserve more reviews than this!
Unmovingocean chapter 17 . 12/14/2012
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