Reviews for Listen to the Music
mizu chapter 2 . 2/9
oh, i was hoping that Forte would be connected to the murder somehow, but apparently not...
Patresa chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
I've never read a parody before but i like it. Poor Forte!
lj13oct chapter 2 . 10/1/2012
Forte! Libs! lolol! I actually giggled my way though this one and probably got branded as a nutcase in the coffee shop but eh it's totally worth it!
Aeidhryn chapter 2 . 12/13/2011
Umm... the piano tipped it into the "definitely crack" category, just saying...
PurpleDancnNinja chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
i l.o.v.e your stories like woah at all of them _

-jazz
xxxGleekxxx chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! IT IS TRULY INSPIRING AND AMAZING AND IT WOULD BE SUCH A SHAME FOR IT TO BE UNFINISHED... PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE WITH CHERRIES ON TOP? PRETTY PLEASE WITH JISBON ON TOP!
Tinuviel Rose chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
I loved Forte, he reminds me of Rincewind's luggage. And that gave me another idea, what if they had to solve a case where an inanimate object was the killer?
katiegirl101199 chapter 2 . 10/6/2010
This was crazy funny and cute. I loved it! Amazing writing!
amber chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
Haha, I loved it! Forte was so random! You made me smile and giggle a lot. Tehehe, thank you for the silly fun!
Arcadya chapter 2 . 4/3/2010
her leg 'elegantly' elevated in the candlelight. That's one of the most hilarious things I've ever read.

the colour of the case file she was holding made her skin look positively luminous - too funny.

He'd never look at flannel the same way again. The way the bottoms of the pants dragged slightly on the floor... - I'm soglad no one's watching me right now. They'd think I was insane, laughing like I am over that thought.

AND you gave Lisbon a boyfriend. I'm pleased. Even if Julian the Accountant didn't work out.

Top stories include the fact that there's been a very localized power outage inexplicably limited to our hotel and the restaurant we went to last night, a story about a beautiful pair of out-of-towners who stunned the locals at open mike night last night at the aforementioned restaurant and a story about a woman in town who won first prize in the draw at the local bazaar, giggled all over the shop, seriously.

Sweet? She thought a crazy obsessed piano following her around was sweet? I certainly think it's sweet. Who wouldn't want a piano serenading you? Could you make requests of it?

"Oh my god. Jane! You're jealous of a piano!" Lisbon couldn't have kept the amusement out of her voice if she'd wanted to. - and there's the evidence of your genius :)

It's the paino wasn't it? He's got some other magical power to go along with sentience, and he's been using it to change the inhabitants of Harmony. Making everything about the music. Not that I disapprove or anything... He's definitely a character I'd like to see again.

Actually he kinda reminds me of Luggage, only more musical.
Arcadya chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
other than the odd compulsion to press her fingers to her lips and giggle girlishly from time to time - too funny.

Because that's all Lisbon does at work - sits around and rumerates about how 'gorgeous' Jane is. That's what she's paid to do after all :)

Ah yes, and now I've come to the 'only one room' plot device. I'm looking forward to what you do with it now...

I like that the 'can't beat 'em join 'em' incident fades in their minds until the 'crazy' comes back...

They're probably all in room 113 - that's where all my flashlights end up!

Blame the candles, that's always a sane thing to do...

All aphrodesiacs, all the time. - har! That's fantastic. I would not be able to say that with a straight face if I worked in that restaurant...

NO WAY! My brain can't even contemplate the image of Jane singing 2 become 1, that's so hilarious and disturbing at the same time, I don't even know what to say... :)

Can't you just picture Lisbon alternating between Angry and Flattered. That's so hilarious on her face... Now all she needs to do is wave a hand hown and up and change facial features during the middle fo the wave.

It was like the second coming of Susan Boyle, but you know, far more attractive. - Giggled for ages at this point.

Forte loves Lisbon - is it weird that I'm seeing a new, slightly disturbing, far-side-esque comic entering the newspapers?

I love Forte, he's very cute in my mind :)
slimkay chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
I am a big fan of the Mentalist. First fic read. Incredible. I am left speechless.

It felt like the real deal to me (well.. wishful thinking on my part). Characters felt so real, the banter was there, and the Jane's courtship was so compelling.

I just loved it. Every word of it.

I'll be looking forward to reading your next stories :)
FiveRoses chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
This is very quirky and amusing. The sheep-covered pyjamas gave me an Ally McBeal flashback - the whole pyjama thing made me giggle, as did Lisbon's choice of subjects for sleep-talking.

Forte was very funny (though I did battle to figure out how he got in and out of buildings, pianos being a somewhat awkward size and all!) - loved the 'I'm a Believer' bit!

Glad Lisbon bowed to the inevitable in the end - I was starting to feel a bit sorry for Jane, getting upstaged by a piano! :)
Alamo Girl chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
If I was in bed wit Jane, chocolate chip cookies would definitely be what I'd be talking about in my sleep.

And skyscrapers. Cuz, y'know, there so *big*. Oh, they'd arouse Jane's interest, methinks.

Forte playing Mighty Mouse - that needs to be Lisbon's entrance song when she's about to tackle a suspect. Really.

And Jane should be jealous of Forte. He's quite a catch, after all. HE! LOVE this to bits and pieces!
chocolatefan chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
That was amazing, Really nice :) I loved Forte, he's awesome!
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