Reviews for Stolen Souls
NessieFY chapter 27 . 7/28/2011
I did know rose was undercover, but I love how you painted her! Cold, calculating, precise, and without many weaknesses. Thanks for not making her a victim getting vengeance. That gets tired after a while. But I love that she is the one pulling the strings. I hope she and Emmett wind up together, but worry about who won't survive til the end. Thanks for the update!
Kenzersmom chapter 27 . 7/28/2011
rose is one tough bitch that is falling in love.. you portrayed taht well. it is a shame her world is going to crash down on her when she is full of good intentions.. but we all know where good intentions can lead.. straight to hell. i think you are going to get her killed for some reason. well we shall see. i can't wait for more!
kezcullen chapter 27 . 7/28/2011
loving the plot twist!

knew there had to be someone else...ddn't think it would be her though. interesting back story.
Lily Adrienne chapter 27 . 7/28/2011
Hola Naya! Yes i know i haven't been around much. Nope i didn't flounce on you. Reason being my laptop went kaput just as i upgraded my internet package. Anyways, i just got back the lappie and read SS 3 chaps back-to-back. I love the not mentioning whose POV it is in the beginning of chaps. Makes it more interesting to find out who it is.

Sooo ... E knows Twilight's real name and wth, he went to see Aro? Rose is right. E's an idiot. Impulsive too. Knew it that Rose is somekind of an officer of the law. Bet she kicks ass! Hhhmmmm Charlize Theron as Rose maybe. LOL! I only thought of her because I just saw her as evil queen in Snow White and the Huntman's promo pic
lovebel chapter 26 . 7/23/2011
OMG Naya, are you trying to give me a heart attack? I'm starting to think you have a plan and that plan is to good to figure it out. :)

Loved EPOV, but I always do. I'm so glad he finally came clear with Jasper and that they're on the same page now.

Can't wait to see what you have in store next.

Thank you for the update hon!

Till next time.

Lovebel xo
kezcullen chapter 26 . 7/23/2011
excellent chapter- finally edward gets it.
diamondsteffii chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
I know I'm just at chapter 2. But I admit I peeked a little into later chapters to make sure it's what I'm looking for. :) No offense.

And I really have no idea why you get not as many reviews as you deserve. I mean your story is so deep and complex. Every little decision, a character, makes an impact into another character's life. THAT'S REAL LIFE. If you could just make decison for yourself and nobody makes or breaks your future. It's just not possible. Even if you decide to don't intervene, you just do, by doing so. Every thing is associated with some thing else. Okay, now I'm beginning to ramble. LOL.

But really, I already love this story. And I try to give you good enough reviews that you get even more motivated. I think, I speak for every other reviewer as well. :)

DNTK chapter 26 . 7/11/2011
So..I love the plot and I really want to bring myself to love this story but being that I'm not at all crazy about Bella/Edward and I am completely indifferent to Alice/Jasper you can see why I just can't. I am obviously a Rose/Em fan and I absolutely love what you did with their characters but its like we are being left in the dark. Its been 26 chapters and we are getting there,but there have barely been any character developments in their plotline. It's like I can't tell if this is supposed to be suspense, or if this is just a I don't care about these character so we will only bring them out every blue moon. Oh well I guess they are just meant to be supporting characters in this story? I'm not trying to be rude, it would just be nice to see more of them.

P.S I'm am sadly still hoping with all my heart for a meaty Rose POV.
sandraev1 chapter 26 . 7/10/2011
How will Edward join them? Emmet had to get to Aro first ,right?So the next update is in August? I'm seriously freaking out, anxious to see what happen to Bella. Thanks
sandraev1 chapter 25 . 7/10/2011
Well the shit hit the fan. Is Emmet making a good desicion? It would totally make my day if Aro is not in his office. Are you still planning to end the story with 51 chapters or was it 50. Seriously you are taking us an never ending roller coster. Thanks
sandraev1 chapter 24 . 7/10/2011
Holy moly, that is twist I did not expect. I guess it's true when you are young you are naive. Bella could have went with her mon. But what if her mom is in the Russian mafia, or maybe she just thought that Renee didn't want to adopt Alice. I feel bad for Alice because she was lied to by her best friend who she considered her sister. Could all this suffering been prevented? Thanks
sandraev1 chapter 23 . 7/10/2011
Well I think jasper strength is his love for aluce bit it's also his weakness. Aww poor Alice and Edward they probably think they are being betrayed by their best friends. Thanks
oskigal chapter 26 . 7/10/2011
Well now Edward knows. This was another great chapter, you are doing wonderfully cultivating the different character's voices. I am excited to see what will happen next. Thanks for the chapter!
roxiegirl chapter 26 . 7/10/2011
Thanks bb. Another amazing chapter! Glad Edward finally got the big picture. For a smart man, he's kinda dumb sometimes. And oh shit, he went to see Aro? Crap, he's crazy...please don't let it turn out bad...with chocolate and sprinkles on top? Hope to see you soon. Mwah!
sandraev1 chapter 22 . 7/9/2011
I like reading Alice letter. It gave me a new perspective. She seems just us committed as Jasper to fight for their love. Thanks
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