Reviews for iDid Not See That Coming
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
Too bad it's only a one-shot. I mean Freddie was just RAPED. There is a lot of things that could be added to this.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
Interesting, her mind just went blank with only one goal ...dominance now Freddie has truly suffered it all Good Literature ;)
GregTheTroll chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
SIMPLE WINCHESTER chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Wow! I liked it!
Senshi Raidon chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
o.O HUH? _ That was so...confusing. What the hell happened to her?

Ashboo211 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I have never read anything like was very a good way.
demondreaming chapter 1 . 4/15/2011


I don't even know. I'm... well, it's sort of well written, but... I'm ever so confused by it. It raises many more questions than it answers. I think you've come a long way from this...
icarlyfreak chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I know I'm a little late on reviewing, but: THAT WAS FREAKING EPIC!
Flamingo Dance Master chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
O.o I wanted to make insensitive jokes here, but I realize that this is probably the most original story on this whole damn site.

You should win an award. Originality seems to be considered a capital offense in America now, and anyone who shows it should be lauded as a hero lmao
sockstar chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow. That was intense, and disturbing. But a very good story/writing on this subject.

And shockingly, plausible.

Have you thought about a 2nd chapter/follow up with Carly finding out/Freddie telling her?
TheGunSlinger82 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Lol nice story. Is there such thing as bitch punching, and If I was him I would have just let it happen, then have been happy!
NickIsMine chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
RAPE! Don't write rape! They will only get you flames!
MadMaddie2 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I really like it
DO-it-for-SEDDIE chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
tha was different! SEDDIE FTW
crazy-apple94 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
i liked this story because it was an interestin change of pace from the usual romantic or lustful story. in this one sam was just dominating freddie. if you know any simular stories can you tell me