Reviews for Sweet Serenity
jasperhalelova chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
in italy they call it euros instead of dollars!
Firerebel chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
Urgh. I know it's hard but who just goes to Italy unless you're rich like the Cullen's. It's not easy to go from Forks to Italy or big flight last minute. Plus if she wanted to die why in Italy. Plus very rushed intro into volturi. Again yes you want to get to the main story plot but rushing the beginning deters people from reading to the good parts.
jessabelle witloft chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
10269.95 Euro
FireRebel chapter 8 . 5/8/2014
Haha wow. Okay for a story plot that is often ruined with super fast unrealistic bonding changing love etc you've done a pretty swell job so far. One thing the typo in this chapter was Alice instead of Alec and considering Alec was grabbing Bella and kissing her on
The neck it was pretty startling. Haha but good story so far.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I love this story. But to help you out here's some advice: more in the middle lol 6-10 you use " then you use ' these. Can you stick to just I one like just " or just ' again love story and the plot and keep it up ;D
Guest chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Italians use euros
karen Whitlock Cameron Lahote chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
bella14340 chapter 20 . 6/22/2013
ShinigamiReiko chapter 19 . 5/29/2013
That was hilarious
ShinigamiReiko chapter 17 . 5/29/2013
"Oh I'm terribly sorry. I thought you may want to give up this little girl for adoption," she said while pointing at Alice who was fuming u just made my day
ShinigamiReiko chapter 12 . 5/29/2013
"We Didn't order any freaking strippers!' Alec and Jasper yelled at the same exact time in unison I was laughing like crazy :P
ShinigamiReiko chapter 9 . 5/29/2013
Hey Rosalie
Guest chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
lol felix
kindaxx44myrnin chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
about the rescent everything still stands except i answered the question. i need to be more patiant :D and i am glad you didnt get too hurt pheeeww xxx :D
kindaxx44myrnin chapter 10 . 4/7/2013
hi even though this was probably finished a zilion years ago but i'm confused did the cullens actually say they didnt want her or did edward lie or something? btw i love this story it's sooo cute xxx
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