|Reviews for Sweet Serenity|
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/4
The last comment is so true lol
| Jasmine chapter 20 . 3/21
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I LOVED IT! CAN YOU AT LEAST MAKE A SEQUAL?! MAYBE ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS AFTER THE WEDDING?
| B4bidden.Products chapter 20 . 3/17
This story was good it had me smiling and laughing and that is exactly what I needed after a stressful day so thank you
| jasperhalelova chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
in italy they call it euros instead of dollars!
| Firerebel chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
Urgh. I know it's hard but who just goes to Italy unless you're rich like the Cullen's. It's not easy to go from Forks to Italy or big flight last minute. Plus if she wanted to die why in Italy. Plus very rushed intro into volturi. Again yes you want to get to the main story plot but rushing the beginning deters people from reading to the good parts.
| jessabelle witloft chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
| FireRebel chapter 8 . 5/8/2014
Haha wow. Okay for a story plot that is often ruined with super fast unrealistic bonding changing love etc you've done a pretty swell job so far. One thing the typo in this chapter was Alice instead of Alec and considering Alec was grabbing Bella and kissing her on
The neck it was pretty startling. Haha but good story so far.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I love this story. But to help you out here's some advice: more in the middle lol 6-10 you use " then you use ' these. Can you stick to just I one like just " or just ' again love story and the plot and keep it up ;D
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Italians use euros
| karen Whitlock Cameron Lahote chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
IT WAS GOOD BUT ANIMAL BLOOD REALLY UGHH...
| bella14340 chapter 20 . 6/22/2013
| ShinigamiReiko chapter 19 . 5/29/2013
That was hilarious
| ShinigamiReiko chapter 17 . 5/29/2013
"Oh I'm terribly sorry. I thought you may want to give up this little girl for adoption," she said while pointing at Alice who was fuming u just made my day
| ShinigamiReiko chapter 12 . 5/29/2013
"We Didn't order any freaking strippers!' Alec and Jasper yelled at the same exact time in unison I was laughing like crazy :P
| ShinigamiReiko chapter 9 . 5/29/2013