Reviews for The Law of Thermodynamics
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I'm going to cry! Poor Sam! Great story!
robby1925 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
This was heart-breakingly amazing. It was so sad and so well written. It made me cry. Great job.
ALostEcho98 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
i love your story!
it makes perfect sense and breaks us emotionally.
i just hate the fact that dean cant see sam for who he truly is, after everything sam is trting to protect dean and dean just doesn't notice

it pisses me of and shatters my heart
thesunwillshineclear chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
That was such a heart-wrenching story :'( Fantastic writing, though.
MsArtemis chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I've had this in my favorites for a longgg time and I couldn't help but say how beautiful this story is. I've read it aloud to most of my family and they all agree it's superbly written.

Wonderful.

Absolutely well-done.
calliopechild chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Lovely. Just lovely. Cas and Sam and an awesome heart-to-heart and some absolution (if only Sam would just take it) all in one story...and you did a great job with it. :)
ariex04 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
This story is really good. I feel bad for them, but especially Sam. Nice job with this!
DBwinchester chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
oh how i loved this story. and poor sammy, my heart hurts for him.
primadonna cat chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Loved this! I love the concept of Grace and how Sam mentions that energy can neither be created or destroyed! I think that vessels must have some Grace in them to function as vessels. I also wonder what the point was of Azazel's blood feeding.

Thanks for having Sam have the talk with Cas, very nicely done!
Cainchan chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
hey :-)

I like the talk between sam and castiel.

I have to say, I also do not like castiel and the way supernatural has turned since season 3 and I can feel with you.

yours cain
Desertfyre chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
This was a very interesting take on the bloodline of the Winchesters...and somehow it makes perfect sense.

I really enjoyed the story. Great job!
TraSan chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Wowee, great theory! I like how you expanded on this bit about the vessels and why it had to be Sam and it had to be Dean. Nicely done.

I don't have a great deal of use for the whole angels aspect on SPN either, but hey - when the characters talk, they talk!

Good job capitalizing on it, and providing some nice groundwork.

The ending was a bit of an emotional wallop. You made my Winchester heart ache for both those boys.
Dr. Colleen chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I love it when Sam figures things out.

I hate it when he hides things from his brother.

I adore this heartbreaking story.

You are awesome.
strawberryswing47 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
I really enjoyed this story. It was so well done and it really felt like somehow you got into the writers' of the show's head and delved into their plot development. I really enjoyed the comparisons. Great job!
psquare chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Lovely, and beautifully written! I admit that I'm no big angel-fan, either, but I love how you've tapped into Castiel's voice here. The little touches - his constant "Samuel"s, the "smell of burnt and rancid meat" - yeah, cool little pieces of characterisation.

About the theory... very coherently, sympathetically presented, and very possible! (although "trace of grace" had me snickering for no apparent reason) This is the kind of interaction I crave for between Sam and Castiel in the show, because there is so much between them that needs resolution...

Again, beautiful writing, very consistent and emotionally evoking. I love how you worked the laws of thermodynamics in there - very clever, and very well done!

Take care, and Keep Writing!
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