|Reviews for The 'Gift' of a Second Chance|
| UnLike Us chapter 16 . 8/15/2016
This is a well written story. Though you wrote that you don't know how to continue it I don't think it needs continuing. IT could have ended on chapter 15. Not all stories need to have everything resolve. IT could very well end on an 'although there's a lot of trouble ahead of us and not all the bad guys are gone and we still need to sort things out between each other; Were together and united now an will do our best together' note.
Thanks for writing this story. I appreciated it!
| Lilia0 chapter 16 . 5/18/2016
Despite the many years it has been since the last update, I will still wait for it's next chapter. This is a remarkable piece of work, and I'd love to see it finished.
| Faery66 chapter 16 . 4/27/2016
Hope to read more soon.
| Superfan8 chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
I love this story! I've read it a hundred times already and I probably continue to do so in the following years.
I can understand if you are busy with life and have decided to stop writing on this side, but I would appreciate a final response from you. I really hope, that you are okay, and that something terrible has not happened to you!
| Astrido chapter 16 . 12/16/2015
It seems like you have given up on this story, is that true (since it's been 5 years)? Would be nice, if you could put that in the description, so we don't hope for more.
Anyway, I quite like the story all in all, though in the beginning to have zack run around is quite strange since they have phones.
| Eveleech chapter 3 . 9/25/2015
Really? You had the pre-Nibelheim Sephiroth threaten to kill Cloud?
| Bob chapter 16 . 7/26/2015
This was just soooo goooooood. I can't wait for an update! So well written and character development is great
| Failisse chapter 16 . 6/22/2015
I can't wait to see how the dynamic between Sephiroth and Cloud develops. Cloud is still very much a guarded person with his heart, but there is clear attraction between him and Sephiroth. And I think, that if Cloud ever realizes the true reason for Sephiroth's revival each time in their past life, he may have his perceptions changed drastically.
To know that it was a matter of Sephiroth wanting to be by his side, in whatever way possible, no matter what, would provoke a change of perspective and even a change of heart. Because if that is not a clear indicator of want, need, and love, if a little twisted, then I don't know what is. And that is something I can't wait too see, when Cloud finally realizes.
Too long have they both suffered. I think it is now time they find the reason why they are both still here. They naturally gravitate towards each other, because they are both very alike and very different and no one can quite understand them the way they understand each other. And to have someone like that is a 'gift' as the title of this story correctly indicates. So I can't wait for more of this story. I look forward to seeing how this second chance works out for them. Please update again soon! :)
| BabyGhost123 chapter 16 . 5/2/2015
I like how the sorry is going so far...I do hope that Sereph. Ask Cloud before Rufus does...update soon
| The Whimsical Ermine chapter 16 . 4/16/2015
It's great! It's very well put together as well. I enjoyed reading this
| yukio87 chapter 16 . 3/16/2014
Hey can you give it an ending to this story please? It's so interesting and I wanna see Sephiroth and Cloud as a couple. Please...
| VioletIsInPain chapter 16 . 3/15/2014
(-_-) damn it Heidegger!
you couldn't just wander off and be smashed by a random piece of rubble could you?!
| XxXDarkness Sorround YouXxX chapter 16 . 1/23/2014
I'm not one to usually review but this fic right here deserves it. I see you haven't updated since 2010 and even so I read this with nothing but excitement and entertainment. It's hard to find such well written stories in the final fantasy archive but I'm glad I found yours. It's a shame you haven't found the inspiration in a long time to update but even so I'll wait for it's next installment eagerly - I hope you come back
| 1sunfun chapter 16 . 11/27/2013
Nice and interesting story.
| PCheshire chapter 11 . 9/14/2013
...definitely the best! hahaha