|Reviews for The 'Gift' of a Second Chance|
| XxXDarkness Sorround YouXxX chapter 16 . 1/23
I'm not one to usually review but this fic right here deserves it. I see you haven't updated since 2010 and even so I read this with nothing but excitement and entertainment. It's hard to find such well written stories in the final fantasy archive but I'm glad I found yours. It's a shame you haven't found the inspiration in a long time to update but even so I'll wait for it's next installment eagerly - I hope you come back
| 1sunfun chapter 16 . 11/27/2013
Nice and interesting story.
| PCheshire chapter 11 . 9/14/2013
...definitely the best! hahaha
| kat1316 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Wouldn't Zack and Aerith have died for years ago not seven?
| kat1316 chapter 16 . 5/24/2013
nooo please update! T.T
| kat1316 chapter 9 . 5/23/2013
i like this story but what i dont get is why cloud doesnt leave shinra? I know he wants to become a soldier but having Hojo after is ass makes me wonder if its really worth it and if he does get into soldier wouldnt he have to get mako injections from hojo?
| neosildrake chapter 10 . 4/20/2013
I knew it would be Odin.
Other materia that could lead to surprising results: Transform (Toad), Time (Stop), Enemy Skill (take your pick:), Contain)
Imagine the Great General turning into a frog... ribbit-ribbit. But that would probably extremely humiliating and Sephiroth might never forgive Cloud for that.
| Nemesia23 chapter 16 . 2/26/2013
I just am extremely amazed with this little find, read it all in one go and I want the next chapters until the last. I really loved how fluid your story is and it had kept me hooked for hours upon reading your story. I love how utterly besotted Sephiroth to his Cloud. Its so sweet and I find myself smiling with how he finally can't live without the other.
| Zephyrus Genesis chapter 16 . 7/23/2012
Wow, this story just got better and better the further along it got. It's so fast paced one simply must keep reading to find out what twist will emerge next. I also must commend you for making a romance between Sephiroth and Cloud that does not overshadow the story itself via multiple pointless sex scenes. I've read a couple where I've totally lost interest in the story because it became all smut no story. I also like the survival of Genesis and the odd twist which redeems Scarlett. ((I don't believe I've ever come across such a thing before))
I also liked the twist you made with the summons. The way they are sentient and the ones belonging to Cloud are genuinely loyal to him. Their interactions are fun to read, especially from those watching who didn't realize summons were sentient. Do all the summons remember Cloud?
Now I have a few questions to ask. Would Rufus, Cloud, and Lazard be related by any chance? You mentioned that Cloud was adopted by his mother so that implies you'll bring the answer to that to light at some point. Would it be to farfetched for me to guess that Rufus and Cloud are twins? They're the same age and they have the same features. That might explain part of the reason why Rufus is drawn to Cloud. Cloud wouldn't notice it because he has other things to worry about and blood-line family relations have never been brought up to him before.
I read somewhere that twins, even when seperated at birth, still have some sort of connection. One situation was between fraternal twins, a boy and a girl, who were seperated as babies and found each other as adults. Problem was they misinterpreted the bond they shared as a romantic one. ((let's just say their story ended badly...))
Will Scarlet play a part? I mean, did you just want to redeem her or did you actually have a plot point involving her? Something about her actions now stand out to me in a way I can't quite pinpoint...
It would be awfully interesting if it turned out that Cloud, Rufus, and Lazard were descendents of Minerva.
((Wow, didn't realize I was typing this much))
I eagerly await the next chapter!
| GaleSynch chapter 16 . 7/22/2012
I hope you start updating again. Its too good to just be left alone!
| EchoSerenade chapter 16 . 6/15/2012
O This story is so good! I hope you update soon!
| PainfulJoy chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Superb! Splendid! Amazing! This is my nth time reading this but I never get tired of it. YOU SHOULD UPDATE! Sob sob
| Dragonanzar chapter 16 . 5/15/2012
I knew they should have killed Heidegger. Still, I suppose they couldn't just murder him in the board room. Despite that, they should have realised that a power-mad fool like him wouldn't give up the power he had easily and so would search for ways to get his revenge and acted accordingly. Great story. I'm definitely enjoying the way people are changing for the better due to knowing what happened to them in the future. By the way, how much Mako has Cloud got now? He hadn't had his SOLDIER 2nd injections before he was kidnapped by Hojo, but then Hojo gave him Mako during the experimentation. I was just wondering how much Mako that was.
| BlissfulGP chapter 16 . 5/13/2012
Wow, this fan fiction is simply AMAZING! I could not have done a better job myself, not by a long shot. I am deeply impressed and awaiting more with an impatient curiosity.
| wolfawaken chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I hope that one day this story will be finish.