|Reviews for The 'Gift' of a Second Chance|
| Kowareta Ningyo chapter 3 . 9/25
Really? You had the pre-Nibelheim Sephiroth threaten to kill Cloud?
| Bob chapter 16 . 7/26
This was just soooo goooooood. I can't wait for an update! So well written and character development is great
| Failisse chapter 16 . 6/22
I can't wait to see how the dynamic between Sephiroth and Cloud develops. Cloud is still very much a guarded person with his heart, but there is clear attraction between him and Sephiroth. And I think, that if Cloud ever realizes the true reason for Sephiroth's revival each time in their past life, he may have his perceptions changed drastically.
To know that it was a matter of Sephiroth wanting to be by his side, in whatever way possible, no matter what, would provoke a change of perspective and even a change of heart. Because if that is not a clear indicator of want, need, and love, if a little twisted, then I don't know what is. And that is something I can't wait too see, when Cloud finally realizes.
Too long have they both suffered. I think it is now time they find the reason why they are both still here. They naturally gravitate towards each other, because they are both very alike and very different and no one can quite understand them the way they understand each other. And to have someone like that is a 'gift' as the title of this story correctly indicates. So I can't wait for more of this story. I look forward to seeing how this second chance works out for them. Please update again soon! :)
| BabyGhost123 chapter 16 . 5/2
I like how the sorry is going so far...I do hope that Sereph. Ask Cloud before Rufus does...update soon
| alemery chapter 16 . 4/16
It's great! It's very well put together as well. I enjoyed reading this
| yukio87 chapter 16 . 3/16/2014
Hey can you give it an ending to this story please? It's so interesting and I wanna see Sephiroth and Cloud as a couple. Please...
| VioletIsInPain chapter 16 . 3/15/2014
(-_-) damn it Heidegger!
you couldn't just wander off and be smashed by a random piece of rubble could you?!
| XxXDarkness Sorround YouXxX chapter 16 . 1/23/2014
I'm not one to usually review but this fic right here deserves it. I see you haven't updated since 2010 and even so I read this with nothing but excitement and entertainment. It's hard to find such well written stories in the final fantasy archive but I'm glad I found yours. It's a shame you haven't found the inspiration in a long time to update but even so I'll wait for it's next installment eagerly - I hope you come back
| 1sunfun chapter 16 . 11/27/2013
Nice and interesting story.
| PCheshire chapter 11 . 9/14/2013
...definitely the best! hahaha
| kat1316 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Wouldn't Zack and Aerith have died for years ago not seven?
| kat1316 chapter 16 . 5/24/2013
nooo please update! T.T
| kat1316 chapter 9 . 5/23/2013
i like this story but what i dont get is why cloud doesnt leave shinra? I know he wants to become a soldier but having Hojo after is ass makes me wonder if its really worth it and if he does get into soldier wouldnt he have to get mako injections from hojo?
| neosildrake chapter 10 . 4/20/2013
I knew it would be Odin.
Other materia that could lead to surprising results: Transform (Toad), Time (Stop), Enemy Skill (take your pick:), Contain)
Imagine the Great General turning into a frog... ribbit-ribbit. But that would probably extremely humiliating and Sephiroth might never forgive Cloud for that.
| Nemesia23 chapter 16 . 2/26/2013
I just am extremely amazed with this little find, read it all in one go and I want the next chapters until the last. I really loved how fluid your story is and it had kept me hooked for hours upon reading your story. I love how utterly besotted Sephiroth to his Cloud. Its so sweet and I find myself smiling with how he finally can't live without the other.