|Reviews for And in the end, they come together|
| Tempe chapter 25 . 5/28/2010
HELLO? is any1 there?
y are u takin so long!
| Tempe chapter 25 . 4/22/2010
this is a awesome story! ) but why is it taking so long to get to the next chapter?
| rockwutugot chapter 25 . 4/13/2010
wow this story is like total gormogon material!
i love it!
plz update soon!
| blackbird145 chapter 25 . 4/5/2010
| Tempe chapter 24 . 3/24/2010
hey i really luv this story! :) but there hasn't been another chapter in like FOREVER! :( i need to read more!
(i hope its not just my computer going crazy!)
| Leilocas chapter 24 . 3/6/2010
I like it! i just read ALL chapters! I couldnt stop my self! its 2 am... and i stop only because it doesnt have an other chapter!
| mkbpwb01 chapter 23 . 2/27/2010
Thanks for the update. Always like having Parker included in a story.
| TravelingSue chapter 23 . 2/27/2010
Very interesting read, gormogon theme, I definitely like that kee writing.
My only suggestion and it's more a readability suggestion... careful of paragraph lengths. You'll attract more readers if it's broken up a bit more... thoughts together. Dialog seperate. Just posting what I've seen for writing styles that tend to grip me.
| csimesser1 chapter 22 . 2/21/2010
that was good loved it
| mkbpwb01 chapter 21 . 2/20/2010
Thanks for sharing.
| TempeBooth134 chapter 19 . 2/19/2010
Great Update! Can't wait for more!
| mkbpwb01 chapter 18 . 2/15/2010
enjoying the story. Maybe this guy is stalking Bones next?
| tarayatre chapter 5 . 2/13/2010
The story is great, my only complaint is the chapters are so short. I want more:)
| nertooold54 chapter 16 . 2/12/2010
I think your story and its premise is good. My wish? Please combine some of the chapters to make the reading more fluent. Angela is well-written, her squeals and spying:)
| silver-wings124 chapter 4 . 2/10/2010
Great Story, Looking forward to more :D