Reviews for Hate
SilverWolf338 chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
You spelled mourns wrong, but other than that, it was great! I wish it had a slightly happier ending, just because they're my favorite couple in the series and not too many stories feature them. But anyways! Keep on doing what you do!
person chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This is really good. I enjoyed it.
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
In canon, most of the so-called Freedom Fighters are just background characters, easily forgotten. In the verse, they have thoughts and feelings and lives, and no one who lived like they did can come out of it whole. Co-dependency.

Nitpick: Competition, not completion.
ZuEra chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Wow... So sad but sooo wonderful...
Wittgen chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
That was so very sad. Tragic in an honest and unforced way.
Miana chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
This is so tragically beautiful. Fantastic job at nailing them both!
atasfan16 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
that was deep... I loved it!
Manic Pixie chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
This is really, really, really, REALLY depressing. I like it, but it's so different from what most other fanfics with Smellerbee and Longshot are like. I'm guessing that was the purpose, but it's still something that just doesn't feel quite right with the characters. Maybe I'll re-read this and discover that everything fits, but at the moment... it's confusing.
Biganime40 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
damn this s.h.i.t is sad but in some real good job. i can realy feel the emotion in this oneshot.