Reviews for Yesternight
Gubefan1980 chapter 15 . 6/25/2016
Very nice beautiful ending, yes the Bodleian is bigger but I suppose it depends on when they go. I'm not quite sure when the story takes place, referencing "laces" on Jasper's shirt. It almost sounds like the 19th century but Edward was,turned in 1918, unless jasper continues to wear the style of clothing he wore when he was turned. Cute ending for CCarlisle Millie still should have told what she knew about attacking coven I enjoyed this very much. Your detail in caves knowledge of Spanish added verisimilitude to your story
Gubefan1980 chapter 14 . 6/25/2016
Jasper was such a fool. He didn't ant to kill her, what an ass, he almost cost Edward his life. Total shmuck. Not sure if I'd trust him in battle to have my back, he's a jerk
Gubefan1980 chapter 12 . 6/25/2016
Fucking bitch never said anything is she out of her ever loving mind. I really hope someone kills her what an asshole bitch. Everyone just thinks she's a ditzy seccubis she's a menace.
Gubefan1980 chapter 11 . 6/25/2016
It's about damn time that boy stopped fighting is feelings for Edward (smh) im
Gubefan1980 chapter 10 . 6/25/2016
Damn it's about time,,has,to make it seem like Edward was in danger for Jasper to get his head out of his ass. Snh, great chapter, though I'm ready to strangle Jasper
Gubefan1980 chapter 9 . 6/25/2016
It occurred to me what a stupid tactical mistake Jasper made,sending a newborn. This is just the thing he should have anticipated, a blood trap. Dumber than dirt. Well, this is interesting. I'd like to cheer for Jasper that he bit off Ciro's dick, but I'm too angry with him for the mixed messages he's sending Edward
Gubefan1980 chapter 8 . 6/25/2016
Read your recommendation Raw and Rosy I felt sorry for Edward perverted father, arrogant mother, my impression was that they ended up as lovers. Millie is a piece of shit, hopefully someone will kill her, she's a real trouble maker. Wonder if Jasper picked up that Edward saw him with Maria, that was a jealousy fuck if I ever saw one. It serves Jasper right, he dry humped Edward then tossed him aside congratulations on your victories
Gubefan1980 chapter 7 . 6/25/2016
Jasper is a fucking asshole, he wants Edward but he's afraid or ashamed, or in this case, this is a jealous spiteful angry fuck. What a jerk, what a coward. Glad Edward broke it off with Carlisle, that's just creepy, just: no.
Gubefan1980 chapter 6 . 6/25/2016
That was an interesting chapter, I'm surprised no one noticed their red eyes, or more precisely the,different color, Jasper's red and Edward's sort of red sort of gold, and I forgot they were bringing bodies back for the newborns. Someone in the group is a Brit, poof is a British euphemism for gay man, oh right Edward is somewhat influenced by Carlisle. That was an interesting trick of Jasper's to make Edward think he was full after one wolf,I loved his reactionto the horses. Strictly off limits as far as this Texas boy is concerned, lol tummy"seriously Jasper? What are you? Four?
Gubefan1980 chapter 5 . 6/25/2016
This is good, although confusing, and I'm really pissed off at Jasper for being so cruel to Edward. Kind of disturbing that Edward and Carlisle ave resorted to human blood.
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
That's an interesting turn, putting Edward in Jasper's world before they met in the present good first chapter
Mell C chapter 15 . 6/23/2016
I enjoyed this story. Exciting to read something different. Thank you.
Austione chapter 15 . 8/29/2015
Really enjoyed this story-very creative and colorful characters and world. Loved the way their different times and places they came from manifested in different ways of speaking,
Ryu Master of Seals chapter 15 . 12/12/2014
Good story.
Ryu Master of Seals chapter 8 . 12/12/2014
That was unexpected...O.O
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