Reviews for Yesternight
Elicullen26 chapter 11 . 4/14/2011
I'm all caught up, now o have to wait like the rest of the mortals...

I really like them to stay there, away from Marias viciousness, eventhough here they'd be at war all the same and poor Carlisle will be still trapped...

Thx for sharing, I can't wait for your next update!
Elicullen26 chapter 10 . 4/14/2011
I guess getting that perspective of almost loosing E served him right. I hope j can see Maria like E did.

Elicullen26 chapter 9 . 4/13/2011
Mmmm, interesting, she's a telepath and a vegetarian...but her husband is not. Speaking of twists!

Elicullen26 chapter 8 . 4/13/2011
Wow, the layers keep lifting and lifting...

I liked all the back story it gives so much depth to the story.

I know there's nothing between E/J but I wish E would have stayed mad and indifferent longer. It helps him focus on finding the spy, I think is Millie...

Elicullen26 chapter 7 . 4/13/2011
Oh no he didn't! Ugh, I know J is used to do that, but ugh

That Calward felt kind of incestuous, eventhough maybe J is right, no change is selfless...

This new guy in stirring the shit, I imagine lots of things are gonna change fast...

I wish E will talk to C, tell him about th agreement with Maria...

Thx for sharing!
Elicullen26 chapter 6 . 4/13/2011
Loved the excursion outdoors, it's very depressing inside the caverns.

Elicullen26 chapter 5 . 4/13/2011

I haven't toll you that I'm Latina so the bits is Spanish are very enjoyable (and acccurate, are you Latina too?)

The fight was so entertainning and the sweet moment with Jasper later too ;)

Thx for sharing!
Elicullen26 chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Gah! That was very intense, from the fights, the onslaught of emotions to their surprising kisses and hump, it was great.

Elicullen26 chapter 3 . 4/13/2011

Millies power is so much fun indeed.

I hope there's a way for E to tell C the plan, eventhough he can't trust that Zmaria is gonna follow through.

Thx for sharing!
Elicullen26 chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
Love these two together always but as canon vamps? Perfection. I'm really looking forward the rest of this story.

Elicullen26 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Oooo! Me likey sum dark canon vamp slash!

Thx for sharing!
AllTheOtherNamesAreUsed chapter 11 . 4/6/2011
I'm really enjoying this story. The way that Edward is honing his gift as he sees the gifts of others through their thoughts is really well done. The way he perceives Jasper's gift is very unique compared to other stories I've seen. He really seems so naive, and yet he's catching on quickly. I'm enjoying the dynamic between he ad Jasper, and how Jasper seems to appreciate his innocence without needing to protect it. I do worry about Carlisle...
designslacker chapter 11 . 3/16/2011
katinki has been pushing this story for a while on adf. I trust your writing but kinda considered myself over slash. but I've been looking for a new story-something to get excited over-and thought why not.

and now I'm wondering what took me so long. fabulous! your words hooked me from the beginning. this is is so much more than boy on boy. the characters are layered and fascinating. the original characters are smartly written. Millie! she's palpable and vibrant and just pirouettes off the page. often it's hard for me to connect with original chacters in a fic. but not in this case. every time she appears, I'm inclined to pull out a bowl of popcorn, sit back and enjoy the ride.

can't wait to see where this goes, who will make it out alive and where edward will find himself when it's all said and done. thanks for writing!
Jasper13 chapter 11 . 3/2/2011
the chap's are come out good !
bmango chapter 11 . 2/26/2011
Well... "I'll stay if you'll stay." Isn't that everything? *sigh* I hope so. Although, there's Carlisle... Great fun catching up today. Lovely story so far, I'm completely intrigued and excited to see what happens next. :) -b
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