Reviews for Yesternight
designslacker chapter 11 . 3/16/2011
katinki has been pushing this story for a while on adf. I trust your writing but kinda considered myself over slash. but I've been looking for a new story-something to get excited over-and thought why not.

and now I'm wondering what took me so long. fabulous! your words hooked me from the beginning. this is is so much more than boy on boy. the characters are layered and fascinating. the original characters are smartly written. Millie! she's palpable and vibrant and just pirouettes off the page. often it's hard for me to connect with original chacters in a fic. but not in this case. every time she appears, I'm inclined to pull out a bowl of popcorn, sit back and enjoy the ride.

can't wait to see where this goes, who will make it out alive and where edward will find himself when it's all said and done. thanks for writing!
Jasper13 chapter 11 . 3/2/2011
the chap's are come out good !
bmango chapter 11 . 2/26/2011
Well... "I'll stay if you'll stay." Isn't that everything? *sigh* I hope so. Although, there's Carlisle... Great fun catching up today. Lovely story so far, I'm completely intrigued and excited to see what happens next. :) -b
bmango chapter 10 . 2/26/2011
Yay for sort of made-up, botched rescues and kisses on rock faces! -b
bmango chapter 9 . 2/26/2011
I did wonder about the choice of name for Alvarado's wife and now...maybe...well, still wondering. And I'm glad you didn't wait on Ch 10 - it's so nice to be able to press 'next'. :) -b
bmango chapter 8 . 2/26/2011
Well, I'm glad they are off on their own and that Jasper seems to be talking to Edward again. The Aztec dude is still scaring me quite a bit, but it made me smile that Jasper bit off his dick. hehehe. -b
bmango chapter 7 . 2/26/2011
EWWWWWW! Completely...just no. No evil Aztec dude and Edward, no Jasper and Maria - now Carlisle and Edward is a maybe... But...ARGH! Jasper icky, gross, ugh. ok...pressing next. -b
bmango chapter 6 . 2/26/2011
Hmmmm...Edward helping with bringing in food for the newborns... Interesting idea. I liked that Edward had that split-second thought about possibly killing criminals not being as bad. And I'm all on the edge of my seat with the appearance of someone new that Jasper apparently hates. Pressing next. :) -b
bmango chapter 5 . 2/26/2011
I like the battle part and Edward trying to figure out Jasper. The interaction with Carlisle at the end was so awkward. Poor Carlisle. Only wants to be loved... :/ -b
bmango chapter 4 . 2/26/2011
Oh. My. Well, that was interesting. Talent training is important, but throwing all that lust at each other is a little much. But dry humps in caves seem to be good things at the time. I'm hoping that Jasper is the leak and that Edward saves him anyway. :) -b
bmango chapter 3 . 2/26/2011
So, I got behind in this story and I'm playing catch-up this weekend. I forgot how much I loved this Carlisle/Edward trip to Mexico and meeting Jasper so much earlier than in canon. Millie is certainly a twist. And Peter's description and lines may have me giggling a little. I like that Jasper is already watching out for Edward and I'm excited to see how this progresses. Ooh! And I have more chapters (lucky me)! -b
TaraJo chapter 11 . 2/25/2011
It's been quite a rollercoaster these past few chapters, so exciting and intense! At first I was a little suspicious about Isabel and Alvarado, but now they seem to be the best option for Edward and Jasper. And Jasper coming to rescue - that was such a vision, and then the scene on the cliff... wow. Not to mention the ending scene of this chapter. They are so hot together!

Now I'm so curious about what they are going to do about Maria and Carlisle, and do the others, Peter, Charlotte ja Millie stay with Alvarado's coven if Edward and Jasper will.
twimama77 chapter 11 . 2/21/2011
pretty cool
dragonfly336 chapter 11 . 2/16/2011
Loved the update. This is such a great story..the storyline is factastic and different. Thank you 3
mycrookedsmile chapter 11 . 2/15/2011
I love that somehow Jasper has told the Major to stfu for a while so Jasper can just be free to want Edward. Like it was a lake that overflowed. ahhh. It's so adorable.

I am worried about Carlisle.
512 | « Prev Page 1 .. 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 21 .. Last Next »