Reviews for Yesternight
simba5waldo5 chapter 13 . 4/9/2012
So the boys are going after Carlisle. Glad the took care of matzle. Didn't care for him. So they kinda gay a grasp on how they feel towards each other. And jasper is a bit it jealous of Carlisle. Hope they get them him in time. So whose side is Millie on? Great story. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 12 . 4/9/2012
Phobia. So jasper really likes Edward to switch like that. Millie is the annoying, but humorous. Hope Edward gets to jasper in time. Great job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 11 . 4/8/2012
I tried to find mcfearless but it must have been removed. Do u have a copy u could share? So jasper will stay with Edward, but what about Carlisle? Great job. Onto next chapter. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 4 . 4/8/2012
Good story. So Edward is into jasper, and it seems jasper is into him. And Mildred wants Edward and jasper won't let her have him . Sounds like jealousy. Good job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 7 . 4/8/2012
Boy, your story is really intricate. Lots of characters. I like Milli when she is being nice, not manipulating. And poor Edward seeing jasper with maria. Good job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 10 . 4/8/2012
Good job! Lots of action, still don't know who the traitor is, if there is one. Maria could be lying to Edward. Just to use him against the queen. Since she does know her power. Really enjoying this. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 10 . 4/8/2012
Good job! Lots of action, still don't know who the traitor is, if there is one. Maria could be lying to Edward. Just to use him against the queen. Since she does know her power. Really enjoying this. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 9 . 4/8/2012
This is an interesting turn in events. So I think it is Millie that is the spy. Can't be jasper, could it? Can't read to find out. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 8 . 4/8/2012
Real good chapter. Oh, and Happy Easter. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 7 . 4/8/2012
Boy, your story is really intricate. Lots of characters. I like Milli when she is being nice, not manipulating. And poor Edward seeing jasper with maria. Good job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 6 . 4/8/2012
I like how u give recamendations for stories to read. I read raw and roster and loved it as well. I am enjoying your writing as well as the story. Poor edward Seems so confused. Good job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 5 . 4/7/2012
Good story. Liked the book carlise was reading to millt. Great job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 4 . 4/7/2012
Good story. So Edward is into jasper, and it seems jasper is into him. And Mildred wants Edward and jasper won't let her have him . Sounds like jealousy. Good job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 3 . 4/7/2012
Nice job. Seems like jasper is trying to get a read on Edward. Glad Carlisle is OK. And that peter found Charlotte. Nice story. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 2 . 4/7/2012
So Jasper is a bit caring to Edward, trying to make him feel better. I hope Carlisle is OK. Poor Edward though. That wine hard killing someone and hearing their thoughts. Poor Edward. Great job. Melissa
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