Reviews for Yesternight
simba5waldo5 chapter 5 . 4/7/2012
Good story. Liked the book carlise was reading to millt. Great job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 4 . 4/7/2012
Good story. So Edward is into jasper, and it seems jasper is into him. And Mildred wants Edward and jasper won't let her have him . Sounds like jealousy. Good job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 3 . 4/7/2012
Nice job. Seems like jasper is trying to get a read on Edward. Glad Carlisle is OK. And that peter found Charlotte. Nice story. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 2 . 4/7/2012
So Jasper is a bit caring to Edward, trying to make him feel better. I hope Carlisle is OK. Poor Edward though. That wine hard killing someone and hearing their thoughts. Poor Edward. Great job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Just found your story and I am really enjoying it. Not really into vampire slash, but your tale seems action packed and its Edward as a newborns, and Carlisle is with him. So far, really good. On to next chapter. Great job. Melissa
Fictionators chapter 15 . 4/2/2012
The Fictionators - has featured your story on our site for the week of 3/30/2012.

Thanks, we really appreciate your contribution to the fandom :)
ChefJayla chapter 15 . 12/23/2011
Thanks for an interesting take on the boys. I'm glad I stopped by. Millie, she was delightful... I think she needs her own story. Happy holidays
jay.142 chapter 15 . 12/15/2011
Every once and a while a simple girl will come across an amazing story that provokes ones imagination with great diction and a amazing plot. I thank you, for writing such a brilliant story. The characters are flawlessly thought out and excellent written and portrayed. I give your story ten out of ten and an overall standing ovation, for your literary depth and memorable antagonist.

-Jay
jay.142 chapter 4 . 12/13/2011
This story is so intense. The best fic I've read so far. The writing style is amazing.
firetotherain3 chapter 15 . 11/26/2011
Beautiful! This story was a joy to read. Your words contained such brilliant imagery. The characters were delightful, strong, yet vulnerable, with a touch of humor thrown in. I loved them all. Thanks for sharing your talent. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
meepison chapter 15 . 9/24/2011
Stumbled on this story and just finished reading it. So many great characters! Loved your Edward and Jasper!

I'm off to read my way through the rest of your stories. You write beautifully!
TwiAggie94 chapter 15 . 9/18/2011
Enjoyed the tail of j&e. Thank you. Millie was the best!
reluctantreader chapter 15 . 9/9/2011
I stumbled across this and was pleasantly surprised. It was like a period piece without all the crap I don't understand. Awesome work!

Tay
willowfaust chapter 15 . 7/18/2011
glad to find your story. loved it
madyashiefan chapter 15 . 7/17/2011
I was unsure whether I would like this but I gave it a try and I'm glad I did! I LOVE IT! You're an amazing writer. I lvoe how you used the characters and made it so believable! Absolutely wonderful! :D
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