|Reviews for Heaven on Earth|
| DarkGlintingEmerald chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
INTENSE! Loved it! ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
WOW that was intense! i loved it! :)
| Tsukiyo Akito chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
That was such a beautiful story...I'm still crying as I'm typing this.
| ms.loyalty77 chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
that was good
| Corrupted Karma chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Very well written! d(_-)
| luvtoshi chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
It's one thing to punch in result of some goofiness or some pevertness and causing hilarous situations (like Sakura does to Naruto and Tsunade does to Jiraya and Moegi does to Konohamaru and so on), but it's another to cold-heartedly slap (as numerous times as in this story) and hit and strangle someone in the excuse of releiving anger and profess apreciate it.
Count me in the group of one who has a miserable life (SO NOT), as someone so ridiculously suggested.
My message to girls reading this?
if ever your boyfriend slaps and hit you and excuse it as relief of dear of anger? RUN FOR DEAR LIFE away from such bastard. That the classic start of abuse.
| RegaliaAL chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
amazing...it really fits, and it flows. naruto deserves to feel a bit angsty and emotional, and i half-agree with lashing it out on sakura. she needs to know, even in the series itself...god masashi isn't making narusaku easy! :S
but, keep up the good work! XD
| gaiawolf chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Hot Damn! Naruto is usually too good for this world, taking the shit that he does. But this time, this time he actually seems human.
Kudos on your representation of him.
| Quirky-Green chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Oh my gosh i have chills. This is the best dramatic oneshot i have ever read. your truly an author.
| Silent Bunshin chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I thought it was a great one-shot. If people have nothing better to do than flame on your story, then they have very pathetic lives indeed. Maybe once they grow up a bit they can appreciate these stories and their ability to help us escape reality for a short time. Thanks for your writing. I enjoyed it immensely.
| obsessedanimefangirl chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
This would make a great chaptered story.
| NaruSakuMac chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Well done! I like how you balanced out the angst and drama within the story. Glad to see they made up in the end. :)
| dragsly1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
this was pretty good but you kinda went overboard with the whole fight scene, but thats just my opinion
| chelsea-chee chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
You know I always love your work. And this one is no different. See, it's writers like yourself that can have Naruto attack Sakura, and not make it seem like crap! Great job, and I bet your friend enjoyed this, ne? Hehe! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
| Brown Eggs and Green Ham chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Awesome story. Naruto has taken a lot of sh*t from many people so this was bound to happen sooner or later.