Reviews for Missed Train
colorfulCheshire chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I mean, it was cute, yeah. But once it got to the last paragraph, I was kind of choking on cheese.

I love short little things, I do, but I think perhaps avoiding cliche's and the idea of a "perfect scene" would do a lot for this little fic.

Still, it was cute.
Sweet Kagamine Kiss chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
So sweet... oh so so sweet and fluffy, with a tinge of sadness. I really loved it. ;w;
rimiburt chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Aw! This fic is so cute and sweet. I love it((:33 the beginning description was very nice too :) I could imagine all of it.

They're so cute. You just helped me remember the reason I love LenxRin so much ;w;

I hope you keep on writing since you DID break that abstinence streak:P

oh and I was listening to that one song One More Time, One More Chance from Five Centimeters, you heard it before? the movie had a train in it so yeah. SET THE SCENE. haha :P

anyhoo. I'm rambling now. GOOD JOB(: short and sweet, no noticable errors!
hamxham chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
aww this is lovely... *wipes tear*
popoto chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
That was wonderful. I really liked it. Short and simple. I love one-shots. Great job!