Reviews for Living Souls
Be Quiet 1 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
I really love how you don't make everything have a happy ending. I personally believe that when your parents tell you all those fairy tales and stuff and then you grow up and find out that none of it is real, that it crushes you. I personally believe that it is extremely misleading.
TulipNixphe chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
aw sequel? just ta tie up loose ends?
lil night raven chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
i think yu should've made this into a longer story to see what happens between these two. i know i want to see what happens and if he would ever tell her how he feels.
Tyalieva chapter 1 . 4/15/2010

(that was a sigh).


MORE please...
kvgamble chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
wow, you really wrote them well together. I would like to read more about them
EveFidelius chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
-sniffle- That was lovely. Your word choices and ease of character really captured the word touch.
Martha Swan chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Dear pereybere, you wrote the beautiful story;)) I like it very very much.
Proof of Nothing chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
...Aw! Definitely a favorite. :)
CasperBleu chapter 1 . 2/11/2010 Beautiful story. Poor Carlisle!
Moon's Tear chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Well done! I really loved reading this piece. You've characterized both Bella and Carlisle so well. It was short but sweet. Very beautifully written. I hope you write more like this soon! Thanks for participating in my challenge. :) Keep it up!
Sarah Victoria Cullen chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Pretty good. Rather enjoyable to read and very good at tugging at the emotions inside of another being. I know it did that to me. -
Joker2010 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
cute :)
catharticone chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
This is delightful! I love the idea that Bella's presence helps Carlisle feel his own humanity. It's an interpretation we don't see enough. Thank you for sharing!
PATCHY chapter 1 . 2/10/2010