|Reviews for Chance|
| PARIS BYK chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
| Yuki Minamoto chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I love it! XD They KISSED! OMG!
You should make more of them, I swear!
| T.E. Takeuchi chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
This was fantastic! I'm such a fan of BayoxLuka, and all their little moments in the game make me squee. Unfortunately, there aren't enough BayoxLuka fans for me to share me squee-ingness with, but this was just what I needed!
Great job, do write more!
| Artisa chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Hahaha loved how Jeanne caught them! XD I gotta admit I thought the actual kiss itself was a little out of character, as well as Bayonetta blushing, but everything else was absolute awesomeness! :D Like how Luka was analysing them as they fought (even though technically he's not supposed to be able to see them :P) and the descriptions concerning Bayo and Jeanne themselves were on the dot! *thumbs up*
| Katana Black chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Noob or not, this was awesome. Great job writing! _
| xSakuraRosesx chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I liked this! It was very well-written. You got the characters down just right!
| soleillunalover chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Omg I'm currently playing the game and I love it and I was curious to see if there was any fanfics about it. You have made me so so happy. It so well written and tho they were a little out of character I like the fact the Luka grew a a pair. If only for a moment. Please write more. Please? I will give you a lollipop.
| AimzNemesis chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
This is wonderful! I love this pairing, and I also like how Bayonetta shows some vunerability here. Overall, this fic is very well-written and sweet. *adds to faves*
| sanninlurkshere13 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
AW so cute, wow Luka was beigh so brave there, trully If Bayonetta looks at me like that i would definetely run away, THOSE EYE KILL!1 O_O Anyway good job and i hope to see more coming.
| BleachedFighter chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
lol i know XD (Luka's name is spelled wrong XD XD)
AWESOME Story! (for the first time.)
| NatushkaVonDoom chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Oh, I love this. I've just finished the game, and i was HORRIBLY disappointed that we didn't get one more Bayonetta/Luka scene when he realised she was alive.
This was beautifully written, and amazingly in character. i hope to see more Bayonetta fic from you :)
| Devil Rebel chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
| animelover chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
thatwas gaert for your being a nobie and i hope you make more Bayonetta fanfics
| MadHatter235 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Hey there, wonderful story! I loved how you wrote Jeanne, and that RodinxJeanne insinuation was so GREAT!
Lovely story, setting and all, although, on a personal note I thought Bay and Luka were slightly out of character while interacting with each other, but I’m no one to judge, and I do consider your fic to be on a higher standard than my own.
Keep up that awsome work, truly. Have a great day!
| Lavender Fae chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
And such a sweet dedication it is. ;3 I love how descriptive your writing is, and the Bayo/Luka moments are too too cute! 3 You know I want more of this! x3 Wonderful job!