|Reviews for In Translation|
| Tori chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
| mrsvakarian54 chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Wow that was beautiful. It's rare to find a biotic Shepard. I always imagined that biotics can't really control their powers when they are overwhelmed by their feelings, in this case love and lust and passion. And the reference to Archangels and how Shepard sees her Garrus.. Beautiful... From now on my favorite...
| God's Echo chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Tat was so sweet
| NiennaMelwasul chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
This was awesome. Very true to both characters, and I really enjoyed the fact that you added plot to what could I've just been smut. It just...that added a touch that made it much more tender to see that there was more to it than just stress release.
| nefarious vixen chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Ok, that was really nice and sweet, but -what did he say to her?-
Nosy minds want to know!
| ValkyrieKryik chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
omg. i love this story. i've read it at least 4 times now. this was probably my fifth time. xD its so sweet and gentle and caring and loving... i wish i had a turian for myself now. :3 *makes grabby paws.* can i have Garrus? pwease? (
| Fluidfyre chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Glad to have found this story again, it's something that's stuck in my mind since I started reading ME2 fanfic! The idea of translators... and them turning them off. Love it - and you write it well. But Garrus saying "Kaliya" is something I always remember!
| J. Bittersweet chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
This is awesome. I think it's totally hot AND kinda cute that they turned their translators off. I've loved Garrus from the beginning I was totally dissapointed that he wasn't a romance option in ME1, and I can't wait to get ME2. The Archangel explanation at the end is so cute it's like Garrus had no idea his nickname was so epic lmao Favorite!
| Tonnerre chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Truly beautiful, heartfelt and quite well written. Damn this is your idea of smut? This is lyrical poetry is what it is. I feel so assured of their love reading this.
| Firaga Bird chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
You know, if that was your idea of smut, I couldn't imagine what it would be like to read an even better done love scene by you. I'm all for Garrus in fanfics, though as a guy I always felt more comfortable seeing him as Male Shepard's best friend. Slowly, though, seeing the Archangel and Female Shepard romances is starting to warm my heart to it, and this story bumped that up a few degrees.
Like what others said, the no-translators concept was a stroke of brilliance, and damn was it played creatively. I wouldn't even have noticed you being new to writing Garrus as he... cough... displayed his "reach" advantage without you stating it. Brilliant writing technique, I must say.
| WhitethornWolf chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
This was good, except for one thing...Garrus can't kiss. He doesn't have lips.
Apart from that, good story. :)
| dariachenowith chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
As much as I loved the end of the game, THIS was clearly missing :) awesome, thanks for filling in the last gap!
| Haxxer chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
| Ear-Tweak-Sama chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
haha. This was crazy! lol As far as smut goes, this was totally funny and very well written.
The entire time I was thinking,
"Damn! I hope he used a condom."
but yeah. as far as anatomy of turins goes . . .
I have no idea where it would go. lol
I love your Mass Effect fanfics. They're wonderful! and fill
my fan-girl heart with joy!
Keep up coming!
| Thessili chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Gosh, very much enjoyed this :) The translation is a wonderful touch, very unique. And the idea as Garrus as Michael is superb. He's her right hand man, the guardian of justice.