|Reviews for Special Order|
| Psyker Landshark chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Brilliant characterization. I especially enjoyed the Kanji/Naoto interactions, along with Kanji's thousand-yard stare every time Teddie brought up the dress.
And the punchline. Comedic genius right there.
| Rare Kuma chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Teddie just trolled everyone HARD! Poor Dojima, and imagine him having to wear a wedding dress... oh lord.
Characterization is great and very solid. I also love the way you portray the KanNao relationship in this. BOth have grown up quite a lot and I love how Kanji never catches a break, and Naoto standing up for him when Dojima rages over the dress. :D Good job!
| NoctisxNiveus chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Oh my god...so many things to say about this one shot.
I loved it! so very amusing i tried not to laugh out loud because i didn't want to wake up my sister. Yukiko getting married to Teddie? ha ha!
Lulz 'Hunkle Dojima'XD that's true
| psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
After reading your Souji/Rise, I decided to go over your profile for your other Persona fics. And I have to say, this one had me giggling to no end! Great characterization, great dialogue-I had so much fun reading it. Off to read more from you!
| holographic chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
...It is 2:30am in the morning, what are you doing making a poor sick girl like me laugh her ass off? noi'mkidding -
But seriously, oh my lord. This was so amazing. Everyone felt so in character and it was all just so /funny/ and I adored it. I totally thought for a second Teddie was having the dress made for Nanako just as a present like... how little girls always wanna dress up - ? I don't know.
BUT OMG. DOJIMA WHY.
Ps, I have to agree with Rise 100%. Hunk indeed.
| Reever Rayne chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
THIS is just full of wins!
| wolfofsummerbreeze chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I bet it made him feel pretty. You know, after Nanako made him try it on.
| Porporino the III chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
This story was 100% awesome. (The fish bait reference, The Alice reference, and the Kanji/Teddie fur reference were Gold). I loved this. Great job :)
| SchwaWarrior chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
...oh my GOD I CAN'T UNSEE IT NOW. THANK YOU FOR THAT. O_o
This story is... haha, too tired to give an exquisite review. Fucking epic. XD The things I love most I think are the directions you took the characters during the _new_ Setting, and also because it's lovely and reassuring to see a comedy fanfic that has REAL HUMOR in it instead of stupid randomness that tries to pass itself off, you know? The story changed several times throughout itself, and the ending scene was just AWESOME.
Excellent, beautiful work! I must remember this one. Peace
| WindGoddess Rune chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Awesome and funny as hell too!
| Patcheresu chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
| Lady Cheshire chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
So, I've come to the conclusion that your dramas are excellent, but I do believe I like your humor fics the best. This was almost too much for me- poor Kanji just doesn't get a break under anyone's pen, does he?
I like this husband Kanji a lot, he's a bit different than the husband Kanji in Spider Husbandry (a bit more easily distracted, more vulnerable and sentimental). I also love how you consistently (yet different in each case) put Kanji and Teddie together in such a humorous fashion- Teddie nonplussed and Kanji always spluttering in awkwardness.
Great work as usual. I will miss your Persona fics, I do hope you write them again someday!
| ExtraSaber chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
That was one of the best fanfics I have ever read.
Scratch that, one of the best stories I've read.
One of the best things I've laid my eyes upon.
This is absolute genius. I've never laughed so hard at a fanfic before. Great job.
| DemonRaily chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
You really overdone yourself whit this oneshot, and the last lines cracked me up good 3
| zero-damage chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
This reminds me of Spider Husbandry - the married Kanji/Naoto setup and Kanji POV. And just like SH, I really like this one too :)
The setup is great - and the payoff at the end, of course - but it's the style I enjoyed most. Very, very funny. (The freezer scene is a great example.) Kanji's POV is also well done, there's enough of his character in there while still maintaining the prose style.
Loved Naoto standing up for Kanji. "Despite natural laws, the ones that said she was a foot shorter than Dojima, she loomed over him." - says it all :D
Also really liked the sixth section - their different reactions to Ryo. Subtle but effective.
(Incidentally...the way you portray KanNao in both this and SH really appeals to me. Clearly intimate without being mushy. Or it could just be that across the two fics, Naoto's response to Kanji's night-time snuggling is to either swear at him or inadvertently tell him to stuff his face in a gramophone)