|Reviews for The Talk - Shinobi Version|
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/12
Would you consider continuing the story or expanding it by making a remix where Sakura needed some treatment and support? It's the only story in the history of EVER that doesn't turn rape into a plot device and it's a crying shame that it's so short.
| LonelyDreamer7 chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
My gosh I am so glad this ended like this! I was having mini freak outs over here!
| Devil Reader chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
This is a very...interesting story to try to write a review for. It was very well-written and making Sakura's trauma's cause an unusual cause made the "rape" more a part of the story instead of being just a plot device. Well done!
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/6/2013
Someone Else's Problem, aka Not My Problem, aka, Best Kind of Problem.
| Maya chapter 4 . 11/3/2013
oooh, as good as this was I really wanted the reason for Sakura's reaction to be a little more heavy than a misunderstanding (though you wrote it very well!) because it felt like too much of a set-up for the cause to be so not-actually-bad (even if Sakura's reaction to it was very believable!). or maybe I was just wanting more of your story, since whenever rape as a topic comes up in a Naruto fanfiction, it's not often handled this well. Have you thought about doing something more along these lines, explore this topic further?
| mannd1068 chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
Very much enjoyed this fic! Thanks for sharing.
| Debbie chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
I must say, this is actually rather triggering. It's a nice story, don't get me wrong, but the ending kind of makes the whole rape issue... a joke? Eh :/
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 4 . 8/30/2013
ha I love that hwo akward that's going to be for Yugito and Hayate and all.
but still it makes sense with what happened and that it was a THING and stuff and it isn't easy or difficult or anything.
but seriously that's going to be an AKWARD conversation fro later.
but hell tramitised from walking in on people having sex and that actually being a THING witch doesn't get a full haa haa type deal even if there is some humor in how akward all of this is going to be.
still a nice little piece! itresting show case in that.
| Iryelb chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
This story was hilarious, I loved the fact that it all takes place from Kakashi's perspective.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
Can't you do an AU of this story and turn it into a longer one where Kakashi counsels Sakura? It's good for Sakura that nothing had happened to her personally, but I really wanted Kakashi counselling her.
| Osprey Eamon chapter 4 . 5/30/2013
Well, I'm not surprised there is a more structured, controlled, formalized approach to giving the 'Sex, Emotions, And How Horribly Wrong It Can Go' Talk to the younger shinobi. Still, Kakashi doesn't seem to have traumatised them too badly and they'll be given the official version some time in the future too. Assuming they don't run away with members of the Sannin first. Though maybe this will help Sasuke realized all the other ways 'I want your body' can be taken; not that the primary one wasn't disturbing enough in its own right. And Sakura will be getting The Talk: Part Three from Yugao.
Interesting story, I liked your exploration of the less glamourous parts of the Narutoverse.
| LuxEterna1 chapter 4 . 5/26/2013
certainly an interresting story and i believe you found a good conclusion for this story (though i would have been kind of interrested in the discusion between yuugao and sakura and how kakashi may have gotten a little vindication that he isnt the only one suffering through this)
and i have read your rant about the MA rating and can only concur
especially seeing how several ignore it or simply post a "kids-version" and in the an tell exactly were to find the MA-version as if that would have hindered me when i was a kid in fact it would have probably encouraged me to read the MA one because i wouldnt have wanted to miss some details (as unnecessary as they might have been)
finally i believe there are worthy for consideration for your recommendations of realistic naruto stories
A Teacher's Glory » by Larry Huss
Patriot's Dawn » by The Pro
The Mouse of Konoha » by obsidian dreamer (this more than the other two)
| Wandering the Arid Sea chapter 4 . 4/29/2013
What the hell...I never saw that coming. xD
Interesting stuff. Good story.
| ElementKitsune chapter 4 . 4/26/2013
Poor, poor Sakura.
She didn't understand and that led to...
Kakashi might just kill them.
| Lazurman chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
This makes a disturbing amount of sense. It's easy to lose sight of exactly what the ninja really are: Child soldiers, called to do often despicable acts in service of the village. Well-written, well-written.