so, as i'm reading this, the Persona 3 ending theme: Kimi no Kioku starts playing.

fitting.

i enjoyed this immensely. definately one of my favorites.

good work.

damn, i'll be sad to see this go. this is good shit right here.

interesting. he's still a normal, but has higher perceptions. definately not something an abnormal wouldnt be able to do, but at the same time, well within the constraints of normality.

Very well written and enjoyable! :)

I hated you for destroying any future haruhixkyon.

but the ending gives me a little hope

HARUHI X KYON LOVE FOREVER!

suspense IMHO very much so.

In the 8 years that i have been reading fanfiction there have been only a few times that fic had truly blown me away. And even fewer that have made me cry happily.

But there are only 2, now 3, that came close to life changing. I'm serious. This is how much i loved this fic.

This was one of those fic where Haruhi rewrites reality and everyone, mostly Kyon, tries to get it back to normal. As such, it was decently original, especially two parts.

One, Mikuru was actually an enjoyable character, and not the moe-blob that's nothing more than just that. It made her much more of a real character, and not a stereotype. It might make her seen a little out of character, but in this case, it's not a bad thing.

Two, Haruhi actually knew about her powers. That's something very rare in any Haruhi fics. I'd have taken a different path to go even further in that direction, but this worked well too.

It was also odd to see Koizumi beating Kyon at board games, considering how I don't remember a single instance from canon that says that was the outcome, as opposed to Kyon beating Koizumi.

As far as formatting goes, I prefer ficnet's style over the txt files on your homepage. The way I was taught paragraph breaks means you use either a blank line, OR an indent, but not both, to separate paragraphs. Of course, that's in formal Swedish, not English, but it affects how I view it.

Overall, it's one of the better fics, due to decent writing, characters, plot, and actually being finished.

THAT...WAS...AWESOME! Holy crap! I was glued to the screen from beginning to end! It was dark and intense, and almost scary even, the whole way through! And you wrapped it up so beautifully! All the characters were deep and the intrigue between them was so cool! Not to mention this is the most awesome I've ever seen Kyon in any fanfic, maybe even the show itself! I can't stop using exclamation points! I'll definitely be reading the sequel!

Holy hell, this is intense! Five stars, 100 points, whatever.

You deserve it.

Definitely an interesting read, one of the best I've seen in a long time.

Excelent story, although you still have room for imrpovement it was one of the best I have read so far. Congrats!

I really liked this fic. I'll be looking forward your future works.

That was just an amazing story. Very well plotted and suspenseful at the same time. Good work and keep it up.

well done. I like it.