Reviews for Revolution
csheila chapter 8 . 12/1

It’s too bad it remains a WIP, but apologize to no one.

You write very well. Think about your own fiction
csheila chapter 7 . 12/1
Good on Neville
csheila chapter 6 . 12/1
Well done on the kids’s reactions to everything.

I hope to see Snape gutted. Dumbles must go slowly.

A great piece of work.
csheila chapter 5 . 11/30
Great to balance evil Dumbles with enraged Sirius
csheila chapter 4 . 11/30
Good to have the warning. But better to ignore the Weasels and Gryffindor
csheila chapter 3 . 11/30
Dumbles is horrible

We may see a body count soon
csheila chapter 2 . 11/30

Practical advice and hints of more
csheila chapter 1 . 11/30
Terrific opening.

Well written. I could see and feel what the characters see.

I look forward to the rest.
mumphie chapter 8 . 8/18
A wonderful beginning! I am sad that you weren't able to continue! You write very well and you were weaving quite a story!
qwirky101 chapter 8 . 8/15
why do stories always stop when things are just kicking off ? life i suppose. in any case i wish you well
SoSoLazy chapter 8 . 7/28
Abandoned? Sad
jaqmaq77 chapter 8 . 4/10
And another great but unfinished story... I really wish people would stop saying, "I will never give up, and will complete it... (Yes... and the cheque is in the post - No officer, I'm not drunk - Trust me, we don't need protection, I've had the snip - My other car is a Ferrari...)
I hope one day it gets finished... but I'm 70, and its April 2022, so 8 years... I'm not going to hold my breath...
And it's really, really, good... Colour me sad...
deppenjaeger chapter 8 . 3/27
i am sad you stopped writing, but i guess there are good reasons as for why. i loved the story.. it had good pacing the charaters had a good design and the overall story arc made sense and was understable.
good luck with whaever you do now
chaoyue580966 chapter 3 . 2/25
apAidan chapter 8 . 2/3
A very well crafted and entertaining story. Hopefully this review finds you well. I'm reading through the favorites list of broomstick flyer and I'm not certain if I read this when it was first written, but it's very enjoyable.

Thanks for sharing this

ap Aidan
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