|Reviews for Revolution
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/1/2023
Your need for dramatically stalling giving information has me absolutely hating your story. Both Harry’s are fucking idiots. Harry should have started telling hermione immediately after getting away from hogwarts. The reasons for the several delays were retarded and pointless. Hermione should have started attacking Harry for being kidnapped right out of school when he refused to explain immediately.
Second, following canon is stupid. It’s impossible so forcing canon to be pretty much the same is retarded. You cannot keep the timeline the same. It is IMPOSSIBLE.
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/28/2023
I think you were wrong and illogical and cruel to show and allow Snape to kill that innocent family and children. And to show Amelia Bones stupid enough to transfer that tracking charm on another person instead of an object or an animal. That would not risk the safety of that person and his family by Dumbledore and his minions. Besides in order to be subtle there should have been direct order from Dumbledore to Snape that he is to harm no other person. Or in exchange for Snape being safe Ministry or someone honest responsible in Ministry magically monitors Snape so he doesn't physically, fatally, magically harm another person. That's why Snape takes out his frustrations more in the way he does. Verbally and also manipulation etc, not physically harming anyone directly. If you ever decide to continue this story, I hope you rewrite it and cut out that horrible scene.
| erstwhile-S chapter 8 . 6/21/2023
Fantastic and exciting start. Young Harry was admirably circumspect in his approach, as advised by his older version. Ron and Dumbledore totally tried my patience though. I was so hoping that Harry, along with Hermione and Sirius, would get to a point where they could retaliate/kickoff a revolution/etc. Thanks!
| csheila chapter 7 . 4/17/2023
Add Moron to the needs his ass kicked list
| csheila chapter 6 . 4/17/2023
Both Snape and Dumbles need to suffer
| csheila chapter 5 . 4/17/2023
Set back Dumbles and time will free up.
The time soon to put Ron is his place
| csheila chapter 4 . 4/17/2023
I appreciate the narrator’s honesty with Harry
But it’s so depressing
| csheila chapter 3 . 4/17/2023
Though I imagine you can call sponsorship a rape list
| csheila chapter 2 . 4/17/2023
Excellent mixture of magic and practicality
| csheila chapter 1 . 4/17/2023
Lovely set up
Now let’s kick some ass
| MoriganaMarie chapter 6 . 3/2/2023
love the story sad it wasn't finished.
| aletha chapter 8 . 2/24/2023
Please, please, please continue this story.
| EdTheBeast chapter 8 . 2/1/2023
Great story. To bad you ended it and not finished!
| csheila chapter 8 . 12/1/2022
It’s too bad it remains a WIP, but apologize to no one.
You write very well. Think about your own fiction
| csheila chapter 7 . 12/1/2022
Good on Neville