I did enjoy the concept of this story with the unusual creature idea - however, I find it hard to believe that Severus would have forgiven James for his actions as quickly as he did - and Lily was completely unlikeable, arrogant and extremely irritating to the point where I was just skimming through everything written about her.

I just finished reading this story and was very impressed. The characters for well developed and the story was easy to follow. I also enjoyed your twists.

Interesting story. I’m too tired to leave a more detailed review.

Love it!

Lily is alive, how cool is that? And Harry is delightfully evil! Gah!

It is so sad what Dumblefuck did to James, Lily and Severus. What is WRONG with that man?

Thanks for the story. It was a fun romp. Two quick things...Easter is on a Sunday, so I don't think they had classes and didn't they always have a break for Easter?

Yay! Finally some info on what race Harry is. Love the new backstory. wonder if Voldemort knows? Severus? prob not, but I'm excited for his reaction to all of this.

I like how the Great Hall scene played out. It flowed smoothly and the image seemed complete. Most of the details were about Harry, showing he was the center of attention without bashing that over our heads. Only a few sentences went to the students, and even then it wasn't overly detailed. I liked that because it reinforced the feeling that, in this scene, the other students didn't matter. Everyone was staring at Harry, not looking around at their own friends.
Lucius is by his own nature not a very open person. You represented this well, here. Lucius gave the pertinent information to Snape without seeming to suddenly open up his heart and spill anything and everything that Snape wanted. Good job.
Snape's willingness to give Potter another chance seemed a little abrupt, especially if he really is loyal to the Dark Lord instead of Dumbledork. But I've read worse turnarounds before, and as long as Snape isn't going to start serenading Harry in two days, it won't bother overmuch.

Found ur story while extremely bored... I'm not bored anymore. :)
The name meanings were rather interesting. I went and looked up a few just for the heck of it, and while Draco is a constellation, the name Draco can also mean dragon.
I'm excited to read about what cre- oops, race Harry is.
Salazar Slytherin calling Draco Malfoy a 'little popinjay' was absolutely hilarious!

harry can't be so petty as to be angry with Severus I think he's going a bit over board sev didn't know harry was his son and had every right to be resentful.

I am wondering why Harry isn't more upset with James than he is if it wasn't for his plan he could of been saved from the dursleys and sev has every right to be angry I would if my husband up and married someone else with out explanation he didn't even try to explain.

Hey Herald-MageAnduli,

I’m sure this is just a typo, but thought I’d let you know that Entomology is the branch of zoology concerned with the study of insects. On the other hand, Etymology is the study of the origin of words and the way in which their meanings have changed throughout history. Just thought I’d let you know:)

Cheers,
AnonymousNinja3

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Just started and finished reading this in 2020! Makes the Author’s Note at the end make sense, in fact, it really was very interesting. This was a very good work. Thank you!