its sweet like a treat.

Hi ya! Well, first I've got to make this short, 'cause it's bed time. I'm reviewing to give u a bit of infomermation about something I read on ur profile. So please listen to the teaching rant below:

* BEGIN RANT *

Faerie unlike most people believe -or haven't been taught otherwise- there is a reason why there are two different ways to spell faerie. Now, first faerie was orginally pronunced by the frence, giving it the accent it has. Anyway, a fairy is usually a tiny pixie woman about two inches tall with wings and fairy dust; given to modern day image of Tinker Bell. However, FAERIES are different than that. Faeries are divided up between to courts; the summer court (Held/ruld over by King Oberon and the summer Queen Titiania(?)), and the Winter court( Ruled by Queen Mab as far as I know.) Now the FAREIES have a body frame sim/a/ler(?)to a humman's, but are said to hold a ungodly beauty.

Anyway, I'll stop boring u with my ranting, but I thought that if u didn't know about the stuff above, I'd tell. Seeing as how I take after Hermoine a bit to much and can't pass up the oppurtuinty(?)to explain/ rant to someone. Anyway, thank u for the story and I listed some books or references if u wanted to look more into the FAERIE thing.

*1. A midsummer's night's dream by Willam Shakespear. 2. The Iron King by Julie Kagwa. 3. The 13 treasures by Michelle Harrison 4. Lament by Stiefvater. 5. Faerie wars(Now I haven't read the first book 2 the Faerie wars series, but I've read the second and it doesn't seem to be what I'm trying to tell u about, but I could be mistaken since I haven't actually READ the faerie wars first book yet. Just the second, third, and soon the fourth. But give it a wurl, please!)

Anyway, again, thank u, I love u, peace, g'night, and happy summer, y'all!

G'night!

Fabulous :)

what a cute little story i really enjoyed the fluffy moments thak you for sharing you made my day!

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!

I noticed quite a few grammatical mistakes, such as where you put the quotation marks, sentance openers and closers and misspellings. For example, Rons remark: "But—protested Ron."

should have been: "But—" protested Ron. That can be improved.

The main idea for the story was remarkable, however, you didn't seem to grasp the characters personailities as they were from the books. Harry most likely wouldn't have been so emotional about Snape so quickly and strongly, and Snape in turn would not usually have such strong feelings for Harry. I think that you could improve, a lot in fact, if you wanted to.

Other than that, I loved the story. I hope you dont think this review rude or unfair, I'm just ginving a few pointers.

Keep writing!

~Crookshanks

omg that makes harry look like an...incapable person or somthing. like a little kid. its kinda weird.

It was cute. I liked it.

great job on this short story

i'm sooooo the story is over!

Ahhh... Why are all your stories so freaking good? This almost made me cry btw .

Bahh! So cute! I loved it! :D

This is so sweet!

Seriously awesome story. I absolutely loved it, and now I'm going to read your other stories. But you do need to update RTR. That story's addictive. Holla!

xXKodyXx

I like how in character Snape is. Keep writing!