|Reviews for Naruto and the X men|
| redbarron297 chapter 21 . 2/11
Excellent story. Loved every minute of it. the only things I can critique is that you have a habit of double writing- saying the same things multiple times, or being to wordy with you descriptions. Also, try to find each characters "voice"- everyone has there own mannerisms, way of speaking, and there own little phrases. Find those, and keep them consistent and seperate, and you're golden
| Diamond Man chapter 21 . 1/29
Whoa. This story was really, REALLY good! I had trouble pausing from this story because I was always wanting to find out what happened next! Nice work, I absolutely loved it! You can expect to see a review from me on the sequel and the third story. :)
- Diamond Man
| Googlemo chapter 7 . 1/18
I don't like it.
1)Whats the point of sending 13yo Naruto into xmen verse, where the youngest are 16-17?!
2)Why the fuck 70% of the story about other people?! (last 3chapters are 95% about others). There is so little Naruto that I don't understand why you even made it inyo crossover.
3)Also WTF was fight with Sasuke?! HOW Sasuke was winning against KyuubiNaruto?! He won because he USED CURSED SEAL of Orochimaru, and here he won WITHOUT IT! LOL!
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
This reminded me on how fucking damn near fan girlish the maker of naruto was over the sharingan and sasuke to the point where I'm trying to find fanfictions were naruto kills home at the VOTE or at some point rips his eyes out
| ArthurB chapter 13 . 9/9/2013
no offense but its the most boring naruto/marvel crossover I ever read.
| Lahmikhara chapter 21 . 8/30/2013
I really enjoyed the story, it was a good read :-)
There are a few things I was wondering about though. Perhaps I simply missed a part but I don't believe I did.
Unfortunately I didn't remember to make a note which chapters I'm referring to exactly but here it goes:
1) About halfway through the story a reference was made about how Kurt was in trouble for something to do with the girls' showers. I just can't remember reading a scene like that.
2) Shortly before or after the aforementioned scene in point 1, a reference was made as to how Naruto and Rogue weren't speaking anymore due to some embarrassing scene between the two. I never did find out what happened there. Or was that perhaps a reference to his story in the car where she finished it for and telling everyone how he got caught.
3 ) There was something else but I just can't for the life of me remember what it was -_-
Early on in the story there several sentences that simply didn't seem to make any sense and the occasional grammatical or spelling error which tended to trow me of every now and then. On top of that scene switching seemed a little bit to abrupt to make sense on a few occasions. Ending up having me confused as to what was going on for a while. It became clear eventually but it did trow of the flow of the story a bit, if you know what I mean :-)
Further on in the story all of the above points improved greatly and I stand by my earlier claim that it was a great read. I hope this review is of use to you to help you improve your already impressive writing.
I'll be looking forward to the next part of this universe you created. Keep it up! _
| Person chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
I like this.
| KHatake007 chapter 8 . 6/10/2013
Love it. This story has me laughing my head off at parts, and chewing my nails of at others. (Not that i actually chew my nails, that's just a figure of speech.) Lovin' it, keep up the good work!
| Jason123456 chapter 21 . 6/9/2013
i Really enjoyed your story i look forward to Naruto future adventures with the Xmen. Keep up the great work
| Jason123456 chapter 17 . 6/9/2013
| Knuckles chapter 3 . 5/28/2013
This is totally completely amazing best fan fic I've every read as of far
| ussop chapter 3 . 5/20/2013
i loving it
| ussop chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
| mrnaruto242 chapter 21 . 5/18/2013
awesome story i hope you keep it up i just love Naruto & x men of marvel crossover
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/1/2013
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