|Reviews for Connecting the Dots|
| NaruCrazy chapter 4 . 6/5
Even though the fic is interesting, you have gone out of your way to nerf Naruto to the later stages trainig trip with Jiraiya, considering how he loses all sense at 2 tails, even though the setting for the fic is from the post 4th shinobi war. Moreover to "compensate" for this utter lack of skill you have added sage mode.
Yeah, so this is it for me. I wonder if Sakura defeated Kaguya in your fic... meh
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/26
Just as a heads up Knight to G10 is not a possible chess move. It’s an 8x8 square board which goes from A-H and 1-8, G10 does not exist as a playable space for chess, not sure about shogi though (sorry fan of chess had to point that out very good story though)
| cosmicuni chapter 7 . 4/6
so far this has only been confusion and violence. lol is that going to be the whole story?
| yoru no kiri chapter 9 . 3/24
Wouldnt Naruto know the world is round? the ninja should be able to figure out the world is round just by looking at their stars.
| Diamond of soul chapter 1 . 1/20
Dónde estaba esta joya todo este tiempo, definitivamente estaré leyendo esto.
| AsheeFlorence chapter 2 . 12/28/2020
So we have Sasuke's team, Naruto, Hinata and Ino.
| AsheeFlorence chapter 1 . 12/28/2020
This is an incredible introduction. You established the cross dimension plot, presented the characters and even provided the curious case of how they got Deidara's arm. I love this already.
| XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 12 . 12/22/2020
I'm really hoping that whatever you're trying to do with Hinata will turn out alright. If it's actually canon to either of the stories I'm all for it, but I've seen too many stories just shoot themselves in the foot because of not well thought out plot points.
| Dragons and Dragons chapter 33 . 11/22/2020
This is incredible! Wow! Also, the idea of Lee as a Green Lantern is hilarious.
| Monsta7D chapter 1 . 11/16/2020
| ShaiGar chapter 3 . 11/3/2020
My suggestion is: Quit nerfing BushyBrows.
| JustDusty chapter 6 . 9/12/2020
Seriously come on, can they not get shit on at every opportunity? people seem to forget that shinobi move at practically the speed of sound. the only people that should be able to handle them are the likes of superman. half of them are humans. one chakra powered punch and you cave in their brains
| Brandon Boodoo chapter 4 . 9/1/2020
THIS IS TRASH...PURE TRASH.. DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT THE KYUUBI IS? if a fucking sound attack could even harm the kyuubi then that sound genin would be able to rule the fucking naruto world... what the actual fuck?!
Secondly do you think Naruto would actually reveal secrets? this fic died the moment you thought ANYTHING STUPID LIKE WHAT YOU DID TO CAPTURE NARUTO IN RAGE KYUUBI MODE WOULD LOSE TO ANY HUMAN SHIT. Fuck off.
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/6/2020
This was a really amazing story! The interactions, the clash of cultures and belief's and the character development was spot on and thought out really well. The one thing that got on my nerve's a little bit was the Ninjas constant distrust of the league. In the beginning it makes sense that they would be wary of The League considering how their first contact went, but as the story progressed that anomosity still was there even when they offered to help them. But great story none the less.
| REI.CHAN40487 chapter 5 . 8/5/2020
i love this story UwU. it's like fanfiction said oh hey lets bring the good stories no attention.