|Reviews for Connecting the Dots|
| Nero Z Reaver chapter 5 . 5/18
A response to your AN: Might i suggest the flames of did say that flames are welcome. Story's going great
| Nero Z Reaver chapter 2 . 5/18
funny thing is that the movie 'Flashpoint Paradox' is what made me search for Naruto and J.L. xovers, funny to 'see' Kakashi still being a rather laid back person even after sending people to another dimension
| Nero Z Reaver chapter 1 . 5/18
This story sounds about good, for a few minutes i was thinking that it was Orochimaru's arm, aaaand then they mentioned it having a mouth, my reactionWell then..!" Im'ma go continue reading, and find out if this is still on going or left frozen, or if you're still writing fics , peace~!
| Shadow-DJ chapter 1 . 3/15
Pfft...Okay, the raction to the palm is top notch XD
| Josiah chapter 33 . 3/4
*claps* another wondrous fic down. thank you for the pleasant surprise that this series turned out to be _
| josiah chapter 28 . 3/2
this chapter was short. it was by no means boring. This was why shikamaru was my favourite character from naruto.
| Josiah chapter 26 . 3/2
having bizarro say that he is NOT here to help them would just mean he's there to help right?
| jon reeve chapter 16 . 2/28
I see Hinata got her grope in...
| Llyrica chapter 5 . 2/27
Hi, I know this is an old fic, but I just started reading it and so far I am really enjoying it. I'm just wondering if there's a reason why the language barrier exists for some, but not for others. Like, the group that showed up with Sasuke doesn't seem to be having issues with understanding or being understood. Thank you for writing and sharing this! :)
| Josiah chapter 10 . 2/24
the naruto universe has paper money. sasuke should be at least cursorily aware of what a dollar bill is when he sees a lot of pieces of paper lots of people are really desperate to get.
besides that, interesting chapter as always.
| josiah chapter 4 . 2/22
a fun fic so far. however i'm really annoyed by teh fact that there's no explanation for hinata and lois communicating so easily. I've never heard lois speak japanese, and she ceratinly shouldn't have known to do it off the bat.
the language barrier thing is something i enjoy very much with this fic and it annoyed me to see it forgotten about in this one interaction.
| Anna chapter 33 . 2/18
Hi! I loved the story but I have a request. Could you make oneshots expanding on various moments in the story, like about the ninja's training with the superheroes or how Ino felt before her telepathic overload?
| Dcharger chapter 5 . 2/16
It's really good. Raven was to easily beaten, tho. Also try cutting out the "Oh?" before questions. it makes the characters seem childish and unprofessional, which they all are in there own ways. it's much to defensive.
| Dcharger chapter 4 . 2/15
Dude, you realize that Flash is a scientist, right? if any of the leaguers were to follow that conversation, then Flash definitely would be one of them.
| SageModeSasuke chapter 31 . 2/12
Outstanding. Well done.